12-21-2007, 02:59 AM
o.o chapter 1 had a really rotten start (for u) with the whole jealousy thing. Good start for a story tho =)
Chapter 2 was nice. Hooni's finally looked at in a different perspective xD (kinda a bad guy rather than a good guy?) overall, nicely done.
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Chapter 2 was nice. Hooni's finally looked at in a different perspective xD (kinda a bad guy rather than a good guy?) overall, nicely done.
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. Including me, I know lol)