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Myeah.... I had a topic before with the first chapter, but I can't find it here anymore... Roll back anyone?

But yeah, Here is my (nameless) Audition FanFic ^^.

<div align="center">Chapter 1: The Beginning

''Why are they so mean to me?'' Vin thought while running.
''I didn't do anything and they are irritating the crap out of me!'' Tears came out of his Eyes.
His vision was getting bad, but he didn't stopped running.
''BANG!'' He ran against somebody else and they both fell on their butt.
'' Hey, watch i...'' The girl Vin bumped noticed he was crying.
'' Hey... are you ok? '' She asked after getting closer.
'' No, those stupid idiots are poking the heck out of me and they are calling me stupid names! '' Vin said crying and angry.
'' It's alright. Let your anger out. ''
After a few minutes he calmed down a bit and looked at the girl.
'' Thank you...''
'' No problem. Say, what is your name? '' The girl smiled.
'' Vin... You? ''
'' My name is Hanako... Wait... Vin? That is such a normal name! What is your other name? '' Hanako asked, looking confused.
'' My... other...name? '' He said confused.
'' Yeah, the one you get when you become at least 12 years old. ''
'' I never had another name... Why? ''
'' That means that you aren't from here!''
'' tap...tap...tap...'' Footsteps from around the corner.

'' Uh oh, I think we have to go somewhere else for now! Follow me! '' Hanako grabbed Vin's arm and ran to a club building full with people and a lot of different music.
'' I hope we are save here. '' She let loose of his arm after getting at a table and 2 chairs.
'' What's wrong, why were we running? '' He looked confused at Hanako and both sat down on a chair.
She went closer to Vin and wispered: '' Look, this is AuditionWorld, a world where every person becomes a dancer after getting a Guardian. You get your Guardian when you are 12 years old. The name of your Guardian is also the name you will use instead of your normal name. You, on the other hand, aren't from this world and so you don't have a Guardian. 1 of the rules in this world is that people who don't have a Guardian, with exceptions of 11 years and younger people, will get excecuted OR sent to a torturing place. ''
'' What!? How can I go back to my own world then? ''
'' Well... That's a question I don't know the answer of. I don't even know how you got here. ''
'' Then I gotta find out how to get back! ''
When Hanako wanted to answer his question, she noticed that the police entered the club.

'' Quick, follow me! '' She grabbed Vin's arm again, pulled him from his chair and ran to an empty dancing space.
'' Don't worry, just relax. '' She said and called upon her Guardian who summoned a barrier around them.
Vin saw nothing, except for white... a LOT of white.
'' COOL – ALREADY THERE YET 100 BPM, CHOREOGRAPHY '' a robot-ish voice said and Vin could finally see something else except for white. He saw the inside of the club except... It looked like a small square room and it was empty.
'' Hey... What is happening? ''
'' Don't worry, like I said, relax and listen to the music. ''
'' ALRIGHT NOW, CMON!!! '' A male voice said out of nowhere.
Hanako started dancing on the song. Vin saw Hanako dancing, so he tried to move... but he can't!
'' Hey... how come I can't dance! ''
'' That's because you don't have a Guardian! You need a Guardian to dance! ''
After hearing that, Vin just standed there, moving left and right on the beat.
''Poor guy, I'm going to help him get back to his world.'' Hanako thought while dancing.
''Shannon, you are a soft girl, that is why I am your Guardian.'' Shannon's Guardian told her.
''I know.'' Shannon thought smiling.
After 1 minute of dancing, Shannon looked at Vin.
''DID HE?!... No, it can't be!'' Shannon suddenly stopped dancing.
''Sorry about that, Shannon.'' Hanako told Shannon.
''It's ok, I broke your concentration.'' Shannon told Hanako.
After 30 seconds, Vin got Hanako's attention.
'' How... Wait... is it really true... eh? '' Vin was dancing and didn't noticed Shannon.
When the song ended, Vin saw Shannon confused.
'' Something wrong? '' He asked.
'' Yeah, you were dancing! ''
'' Is that weird or something? ''
'' Well... YEAH! I thought you aren't from this world! And if you aren't from the world, then you don't get a Guardian and without a Guardian, you can't dance like that! ''
'' Oh... Well...I was just listening to the music and after a while I had a warm and soft feeling and so I closed my eyes, because it felt like a good moment to do so. ''
'' That means that you... you got a Guardian! ''</div>


FAQS!:
Q: '' WTF is happening? ''
A:' This is the beginning, shut up! ''

Q: '' You didn't wrote how they were dancing! ''
A: '' Like I said, this is the beginning of my fanfic, I stil yet have to find out how I'm gonna write that out! ''

Q: '' Your writing style is weird... ''
A: '' Deal with it or don't read >.>. ''

Q:'' What are those '' italic words ?''
A: '' Those are things that people are THINKING ^^. ''

Blah, I suck in making a FAQ so meh lol. Profiles of the people are gonna be created soon!
Sorry for the double post, but it looks better this way~.

<div align="center">Chapter 2: Guardian

'' That feeling... Can you really feel it in...dreams? ''
Vin was holding his pillow while sleeping. He woke up when sunlight hit his eyes.
'' uh... That was one weird dream...'' He was still sleepy and had his eyes opened a little.
The door went open. '' Good morning sleepy head! ''
It was Shannon who opened the door and she came in.
'' Slept well? ''
'' This... This isn't a ... dream? ''
'' What is? ''
'' Well... You and... AuditionWorld and...Guardian and all those other stuff! ''
'' Nope, everything is real, sorry Vin. ''
Vin shoved his blanket away and went sitting on the bed.
'' Tell me... What precisely is a Guardian? ''
'' A Guardian is somebody that defends you, like it's name says. I'll explain how this World is. AuditionWorld is a World that is all about dancing. You dance to earn money and to wake up some kind of energy that you use for like, racing against others. As you know, when you do that, you get a barrier around you. That barrier is made so that nobody can disturb you while you are busy dancing. When you did not started yet, then other people can join the barrier and dance too, or watch people dance. Now the thing with dancing is, you can't just move around doing some moves. You got a Guardian that does it for you. You are like, a doll that your Guardian is controlling, but only when you are dancing. Your Guardian has another job too though, He has to-... ''

'' Hey there, kid. ''
'' huh? Who are you? ''
'' Me? I am your Guardian. My name is... ''

'' Do you got that all? Hey, are you listening to me? '' Shannon asked Vin, but he didn't responded.
'' Your name is...? ''
'' My name is 'Vpower'. From now on, people will call you Vpower. ''
'' Vpower eh? That is a nice name. ''
'' I see that she is trying to tell you how we... let's say, 'control' you. I'll explain it to you. We, as your guardian, see arrows. Not always, only when you are dancing in that barrier, or when something special is happening.''
'' ...Arrows? What do you do with them? ''
'' Well, we got this special power to 'feel' the arrow when we see it, but we have to activate the arrow we see with our mind. The mind of a Guardian isn't very fast in the beginning, but after some experience, they wil get faster. Now to let you get the arrows is something you do. ''
'' Me? What is it that I need to do? ''
'' You are the one that keeps the 'beat'. You follow the beat of the music and on one, you activate it through your mind and you connect it for a split second with mine. How we are 'talking' isn't mind to mind. That is something different I won't tell you now. ''
'' But... how come I did that when I don't even know about this? ''
'' That... is something even we Guardian's don't know. Sorry, you got to find it out yourself. ''
'' Thanks for the information... Vpower. ''
'' No problem, Vin. ''


'' Heelllooooooooooooo~ '' Shannon was waving her hand infront of Vin.
'' uh... what? ''
'' You were spacing out. ''
'' Oh... sorry, I had a talk with my Guardian. ''
'' Ah... Sorry then. What did he told you? ''
'' How the dancing works and that I have to find out on my own why I got one. ''
'' What... What is his name? ''
'' His name is 'Vpower' .''
'' Vpower. That is a nice name. I have to take you somewhere. Dress up and then we will have breakfast. Then we go. ''
'' Okay. ''
When Shannon left, Vin changed clothes and took a shower. Then he went to the dining room and ate breakfast together with Shannon. When they were done, they left Shannon's house.

'' Say... Where are we going? '' Vin asked.
'' We are going to an office. We need to get you an ID card. ''
'' Oh... ok. ''
After 15 minutes walking, they arrived at the office.
'' Hello, can I help you? ''
'' We like to make an ID card. '' Hanako said to the worker.
'' Sure. What is your name? ''
Hanako poked Vin with her elbow.
'' My name is Vi-... err Vpower. ''
'' Ok... Vpower... What is your date of birth? ''
'' The 22nd of June 1991. ''
'' ok... That's filled in. Your ID card should be done soon. Please wait in the waiting room. ''
The worker pointed to a room where other people were waiting.
'' Is that everything that is gonna be on the ID card? '' Vin asked curious.
'' Well, not really. Just wait and you will see it. ''
As they waited, people came and went away. Then Vin's name got called.
'' Vpower, your ID card is ready. ''
Vin and Shannon both went to the same worker and she gave Vin his ID card.
'' Good Luck and Have Fun! '' The worker said enthousiastic.

'' So this is an ID card... hey, why didn't they made a picture of me? There must be a picture here. ''
'' Well, we need to buy you some clothes that looks better. ''
'' Hey, is something wrong with these clothes? ''
'' no no no, I don't mean it like that, it's just... AuditionWorld has a different taste. ''
'' Let's go buy some clothes and make a picture then. ''
Shannon nodded yes and they both went fitting and buying clothes for Vin and later took a picture.
'' Nice picture you got there. ''
'' Thank you'' Vin smiled and Shannon pressed the picture on the ID card and the picture magicaly transfered to the spot on the ID card.
'' Oh wow, that is handy! ''
'' Yes, it sure is! Let's go to my house for now. ''
'' Ok! ''</div>

(ID CARD: <a href="http://smg.photobucket.com/albums/v396/Vpower/?action=view&current=IDcardFanficVpower-2.jpg" target="_blank">http://smg.photobucket.com/albums/v396/Vpo...ficVpower-2.jpg</a> )

End of chapter

Q & A (Actually comment and answer but meh):

Q: " Who is that worker? ''
A: '' Just a random person, duh~. ''

Q: '' How can Guardians see arrows? ''
A: '' They sort of see them like how we see them in-game Tongue. ''

Q: '' how do they talk to each other? ''
A: '' Go read my fanfic better. ''

Q: '' Hanako is in your ID card picture :o. ''
A: '' I don't care, I'm to lazy to edit and she was accidently standing there while Vin made the picture. It doesn't mind for the story later on. ''

Q: '' Co-ol ID card, did you made it yourself? ''
A: '' Yup, but the Picture of Vpower is made by Hanako-chan (and a little bit of cutting by me.). If you want one, ask me, but please don't just save it and change it WITHOUT permission. ''

Q: '' There are alot/some spelling/grammar mistakes. ''
A: '' I'm not mister perfect or mister American, Heck, I didn't even studied English lawl. if you want to be helpfull, point them out by sending me a PM and I'll change it and thank you ^^. ''
<!--coloro:#000099--><span style="color:#000099"><!--/coloro-->Nice chapter! Big Grin You could've at least let me finish explaining though. D:< *Bricked x10*<!--colorc--></span><!--/colorc-->

Vpower Wrote:Q: '' There are alot/some spelling/grammar mistakes. ''
A: '' I'm not mister perfect or mister American, Heck, I didn't even studied English lawl. if you want to be helpfull, point them out by sending me a PM and I'll change it and thank you ^^. ''
<!--coloro:#000099--><span style="color:#000099"><!--/coloro-->Yeah... sorry about that. xD<!--colorc--></span><!--/colorc-->
Vpower Wrote:Myeah.... I had a topic before with the first chapter, but I can't find it here anymore... Roll back anyone?

D: I can't find my wank thread anymore, nor your old topic. High-5?
=O!
Not bad, i like it ;P
its interesting and original?
i wish i could write my own Audi fanfic XD
@ PeachGirl: don't worry, just start and write one ^^.

<div align="center">Chapter 3: The Meeting

“Who am I... Am I really Vin... or not?”

'' Hey, I want you to meet two friends of mine. '' Shannon said.
''Uhm... ok. It's not like I got any plans for today.''
They traveled to a nearby house and rang a doorbell.
'' I'm coming!'' yelled a young boy inside the house.
He opened the door.
'' Oh, hello Hanako! And...? '' The same boy who yelled said.
'' Hey Nick, this is Vpower. He's living at my house for a while. Why? I'll tell you soon. ''
'' ...Hi...'' Vin said shy.
'' Hello Vpower, don't be shy, I'm not gonna bite. '' Nick immediatly noticed the shy tone.
'' Uhm... ok. ''
'' Come in, come in! ''
Shannon and Vin went in the house and Nick closed the door. They went to the living room where 2 couches and a table and other stuff were. They all took a seat.
'' Tsuka is going to be here a little later, he woke up a little late. '' Nick told them.
'' Ah ok. '' Shannon said.
'' Say, Vpower, could you tell me a little bit about you? ''
'' Well... I'm Vpower and I'm 16 years old. Uhm... I don't know what to tell you more... ''
'' Haha, it's ok. I'll find out later. ''
The doorbell rang.
'' Oh he's here. '' Nick opened the door and came back a few minutes later.
A tall young man came in soon after Nick came in.
'' Hey there.'' the tall young man said.
'''hey Tsuka! '' Shannon reply'd happily. '' How are you? ''
'' I'm doing fine, slept a little to late yesterday. ''
'' Ah haha ok. I want you to meet somebody. This is Vpower. ''
'' Hi. '' Vin said.
'' hey there, you don't have to be shy, I'm tall, but I'm not a bully. '' Tsuka has seen the shyness of Vin too.
'' Yup, Vpower is shy. '' Nick said.

They all took a seat again.
'' So... why did you brought Vpower with you? '' Nick asked.
'' Ok, here is the story summarized. He's not from this world, but he has a Guardian. ''
'' What!? '' Tsuka and Nick both said in shock.
'' How is that possible? '' Tsuka asked.
'' That... That is what I want to know too. '' Vin reply'd.
'' And you want us to help him find out? '' Nick asked.
'' Well, yeah, that's the plan! '' Shannon said.
'' This has never happened before... did it? ''
'' I don't think so. ''
'' Do you have something called a library in this world? '' Vin asked.
'' uh huh. '' Tsuka answered.
'' Well, could there be a book that can tell what is happening? ''
'' I don't know, but we can try and look. But first, I want to see you in action. There is a rule in the library about the level of book you may take and read and your dancing skill depends on which level you may read. I don't think that the book that we are searching is easy to get. '' Nick said.
'' Uhm... ok. ''
'' I want to join! '' '' Me too! '' Shannon and Tsuka said.
'' Alright then. ''

They went to a larger room in the house.
'' Get ready to dance! '' Shannon said happily.
'' I call upon my Guardian of Happiness. Come Forth, NickCole! '' Nick summoned his Guardian and like before, the Guardian summoned a barrier around them and all they could see was a lot of white.
'' AUDITION – CANON GROOVE 105 BPM, CHOREOGRAPHY. ''
They were in a room filled with tables and chairs on the side and a big circle in the middle, where they are standing.
As the music started, a voice yelled '' ALL RIGHT NOW, CMON! '' soon.
'' Relax and listen to the beat. '' Vpower told Vin.
'' Okay, I will. ''
Vpower thought of the arrow he saw and Vin connected their minds on the right time, doing a move called toprock.
After that, Vpower saw 2 arrows and thought about it as quick as he can, finishing fast enough for Vin to connect their minds.
After a minute, Vpower saw 7 arrows. He thought of them all in time for Vin to finish it.
Some time later, Vpower saw 9 arrows, but 1 arrow had a weird aura around it.
Vin suddenly stopped dancing.
'' What happened? '' Vin asked.
'' Sorry, I had an arrow where I have to think the opposite, but I failed in doing that. '' Vpower reply'd back.
'' It seems that he can't do the 'mirror' arrow. '' Shannon thought, dancing next to him.
After 1 minute, the song ended.
'' FOURTH, VPOWER. THIRD, HANAKO. SECOND, NICKCOLE. FIRST, TSUKA. '' The same voice that he heard ,before the arrows came, said.
The barrier vanished.
'' Not a bad job, Vpower! Only 1 miss! '' Tsuka said happy.
'' thanks. ''
'' Don't worry about that mirror arrow, your Guardian will learn it. '' Shannon said.
'' mirror arrow? Oh you mean that arrow with a weird aura. ''
'' yes ''
'' Well, I don't think we can get high leveled books like this, but let's search from the bottom to the top. '' Nick said to them.
'' Ok '' They all reply'd and they all went to the library.

END OF CHAPTER 3

FAQS:

Q:'' Wahhh, already only 1 miss, wtf is he!? ''
A: '' My story and besides, he's the main character in my fanfic. ''

Q: '' mirror arrow is chance arrow? ''
A: '' You even had to ask? ''

Q: '' You didn't explained alot what happened in the dancing. ''
A: '' Meh, I'm not really good in explaining, but to tell you a secret, I am planning on making a video of this fanfic. ''</div>
<!--coloro:#000099--><span style="color:#000099"><!--/coloro-->Nice! Big Grin *Was camping topic*

You're gonna make a video? That's gonna be really awesome! XD Good job, and keep up the awesome work~<!--colorc--></span><!--/colorc-->
lol i just read it now cause i was too lazy before! XD

anyway nice fanfic! its REALLY getting interesting! :3

so..uhmm..let me get this straight...they're dancing to find books? o.o *bricked*
Guardian!?
>.>
I wonder what kind of Guardian does Chicky(If you remember him) would have?
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I liked the plot,but the bit about "no guardian after 12 years old = death" sucks.Feel like Cheese-ice cream smoothies,which is half-good : D
Thanks for the reactions ^^.

NickCole: in short... yeah!

HarpyPerne: Had to think of something lol. And to tell the truth, I used a bit of the concept from Story Mode and your character wasn't allowed in the world too, so... yeah... xD

Here is a new update. ^^

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Chapter 4: The tower called 'The Library'

'' Why am I here and... how? ''


'' So... Nick... Could you tell me more about yourself? '' Vin asked while walking to the library.
'' Sure. I am 15 years old, my real name is Nicole and I'm usually hyper. '' He answered '' Oh yeah, you never told me your real name. ''
'' My real name is Vin. What about you, Tsuka? ''
' ' My real name is César. I am 18 years old and I'm a calm person. ''
'' Ah, ok... Hanako, you never told me about yourself. ''
'' Haha, I'll tell you. My real name is- ''

'' Look who's there, the three losers plus a noob! '' A group of 2 boys and 2 girls interrupted Shannon.
'' Could you just cut the crap, Eric? We are in a hurry. '' Nicole said.
'' As if he's gonna. I, Casanova, challenge you to a one vs one dance battle with four rounds. In other words, everybody is gonna dance one on one. ''
'' Alright, we accept the challenge. '' Tsuka said.
'' Wh...What!? I don't think I'm good enough for this! '' Vin yelled.
'' Don't worry, we'll win so that you don't have to win. '' Shannon told him to make him relaxed.
'' Let me take on the noob! '' Eric said.
'' Haha, ok. Well then, let's start! ''
Eric, Casanova, and the other two stood in front of their opponents and summoned their Guardians. Four barriers started to form.
'' Heh, I'll pick an easy song for you. Hahahahahaha'' Eric said.
'' AUDITION – CANON GROOVE 105 BPM, CHOREOGRAPHY. ''
Eric and Vin were standing on a basketball field.
'' You'll never win against my mirror skills! '' Eric said in a taunting way.
'' ALRIGHT NOW, COME ON! ''
As the game started, it went normal from one arrow until five arrows. Eric and Vin had a score difference of 300, Eric leading.
'' Heh, here comes the difference. ''
As the dance battle went further, their score difference got bigger and bigger.
'' Damnit, I don't want to lose like this! ''
'' Please Vin, just focus on the beat. Don't worry about your opponent. ''

Vin took Vpower's advice and started to focus on the beat while his body was dancing.
'' Haha, stop trying. You will never beat me! ''
Vin ignored him and kept on dancing.
He made a move with one mirror arrow and the battle went further.
'' HAHA, I won! '' Eric said when the song ended.
A scoreboard got up and Vin saw a big 'WIN' on his scoreboard including how good he did.
'' What the?! How can I lose!? I was using mirror arrows! ''
'' I don't know. I just started. ''
As their barriers went away, Vin saw that the others were already finished and Shannon, César and Nicole were looking sad.
'' Why the long faces? '' Vin asked them.
'' We probably did a draw in this team battle. I lost my battle... '' Nicole said.
'' But that means that we still won, right? ''
'' What do you mean? '' Shannon asked.
'' Well, I won! ''
'' WHAT!? '' Everybody, except for Eric and Vin were suprised.
'' I said I won. '' Vin said calm.
'' Woohoo! We won! '' Shannon yelled.
'' How did you do it!? '' Nicole asked.
'' Don't know, I just focused. ''
'' Tss...'' Casanova and his gang left.

'' I think it's time for us to continue to the Library. '' Nicole said.
They continued walking to the Library and got there not long after.
'' So this is the Library here...? Look more like a ...tower... '' Vin said softer and softer after looking higher and higher to see the top of the Library. He failed in doing that.
'' Yes, this is the Library. '' César said.

END OF CHAPTER 4
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A bit short... but meh lol. Sorry I didn't made the battle with 'Vin vs Eric' longer :x.

Oh yeah, my grammar/spelling skills went up by 100 lvl's 8D. lol Just kidding.
A big thank you to Hanako for that ^^.
Vpower Wrote:Oh yeah, my grammar/spelling skills went up by 100 lvl's 8D. lol Just kidding.
A big thank you to Hanako for that ^^.
<!--coloro:#000099--><span style="color:#000099"><!--/coloro-->You owe me three and a half hours of my life back. *Bricked* Just kidding. XP No problem, and nice chapter! Big Grin<!--colorc--></span><!--/colorc-->
Mirrors XD
*Imagine Eric just stand there missing for spending the whole song's time looking at a mirror*
Of course you win XD
I actually started to read your fanfic and it's getting really good so far!

WRITE SOME MORE IF YOU HAVE TIME! : D
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