12-04-2007, 06:39 PM
Myeah.... I had a topic before with the first chapter, but I can't find it here anymore... Roll back anyone?
But yeah, Here is my (nameless) Audition FanFic ^^.
<div align="center">Chapter 1: The Beginning
''Why are they so mean to me?'' Vin thought while running.
''I didn't do anything and they are irritating the crap out of me!'' Tears came out of his Eyes.
His vision was getting bad, but he didn't stopped running.
''BANG!'' He ran against somebody else and they both fell on their butt.
'' Hey, watch i...'' The girl Vin bumped noticed he was crying.
'' Hey... are you ok? '' She asked after getting closer.
'' No, those stupid idiots are poking the heck out of me and they are calling me stupid names! '' Vin said crying and angry.
'' It's alright. Let your anger out. ''
After a few minutes he calmed down a bit and looked at the girl.
'' Thank you...''
'' No problem. Say, what is your name? '' The girl smiled.
'' Vin... You? ''
'' My name is Hanako... Wait... Vin? That is such a normal name! What is your other name? '' Hanako asked, looking confused.
'' My... other...name? '' He said confused.
'' Yeah, the one you get when you become at least 12 years old. ''
'' I never had another name... Why? ''
'' That means that you aren't from here!''
'' tap...tap...tap...'' Footsteps from around the corner.
'' Uh oh, I think we have to go somewhere else for now! Follow me! '' Hanako grabbed Vin's arm and ran to a club building full with people and a lot of different music.
'' I hope we are save here. '' She let loose of his arm after getting at a table and 2 chairs.
'' What's wrong, why were we running? '' He looked confused at Hanako and both sat down on a chair.
She went closer to Vin and wispered: '' Look, this is AuditionWorld, a world where every person becomes a dancer after getting a Guardian. You get your Guardian when you are 12 years old. The name of your Guardian is also the name you will use instead of your normal name. You, on the other hand, aren't from this world and so you don't have a Guardian. 1 of the rules in this world is that people who don't have a Guardian, with exceptions of 11 years and younger people, will get excecuted OR sent to a torturing place. ''
'' What!? How can I go back to my own world then? ''
'' Well... That's a question I don't know the answer of. I don't even know how you got here. ''
'' Then I gotta find out how to get back! ''
When Hanako wanted to answer his question, she noticed that the police entered the club.
'' Quick, follow me! '' She grabbed Vin's arm again, pulled him from his chair and ran to an empty dancing space.
'' Don't worry, just relax. '' She said and called upon her Guardian who summoned a barrier around them.
Vin saw nothing, except for white... a LOT of white.
'' COOL – ALREADY THERE YET 100 BPM, CHOREOGRAPHY '' a robot-ish voice said and Vin could finally see something else except for white. He saw the inside of the club except... It looked like a small square room and it was empty.
'' Hey... What is happening? ''
'' Don't worry, like I said, relax and listen to the music. ''
'' ALRIGHT NOW, CMON!!! '' A male voice said out of nowhere.
Hanako started dancing on the song. Vin saw Hanako dancing, so he tried to move... but he can't!
'' Hey... how come I can't dance! ''
'' That's because you don't have a Guardian! You need a Guardian to dance! ''
After hearing that, Vin just standed there, moving left and right on the beat.
''Poor guy, I'm going to help him get back to his world.'' Hanako thought while dancing.
''Shannon, you are a soft girl, that is why I am your Guardian.'' Shannon's Guardian told her.
''I know.'' Shannon thought smiling.
After 1 minute of dancing, Shannon looked at Vin.
''DID HE?!... No, it can't be!'' Shannon suddenly stopped dancing.
''Sorry about that, Shannon.'' Hanako told Shannon.
''It's ok, I broke your concentration.'' Shannon told Hanako.
After 30 seconds, Vin got Hanako's attention.
'' How... Wait... is it really true... eh? '' Vin was dancing and didn't noticed Shannon.
When the song ended, Vin saw Shannon confused.
'' Something wrong? '' He asked.
'' Yeah, you were dancing! ''
'' Is that weird or something? ''
'' Well... YEAH! I thought you aren't from this world! And if you aren't from the world, then you don't get a Guardian and without a Guardian, you can't dance like that! ''
'' Oh... Well...I was just listening to the music and after a while I had a warm and soft feeling and so I closed my eyes, because it felt like a good moment to do so. ''
'' That means that you... you got a Guardian! ''</div>
FAQS!:
Q: '' WTF is happening? ''
A:' This is the beginning, shut up! ''
Q: '' You didn't wrote how they were dancing! ''
A: '' Like I said, this is the beginning of my fanfic, I stil yet have to find out how I'm gonna write that out! ''
Q: '' Your writing style is weird... ''
A: '' Deal with it or don't read >.>. ''
Q:'' What are those '' italic words ?''
A: '' Those are things that people are THINKING ^^. ''
Blah, I suck in making a FAQ so meh lol. Profiles of the people are gonna be created soon!
But yeah, Here is my (nameless) Audition FanFic ^^.
<div align="center">Chapter 1: The Beginning
''Why are they so mean to me?'' Vin thought while running.
''I didn't do anything and they are irritating the crap out of me!'' Tears came out of his Eyes.
His vision was getting bad, but he didn't stopped running.
''BANG!'' He ran against somebody else and they both fell on their butt.
'' Hey, watch i...'' The girl Vin bumped noticed he was crying.
'' Hey... are you ok? '' She asked after getting closer.
'' No, those stupid idiots are poking the heck out of me and they are calling me stupid names! '' Vin said crying and angry.
'' It's alright. Let your anger out. ''
After a few minutes he calmed down a bit and looked at the girl.
'' Thank you...''
'' No problem. Say, what is your name? '' The girl smiled.
'' Vin... You? ''
'' My name is Hanako... Wait... Vin? That is such a normal name! What is your other name? '' Hanako asked, looking confused.
'' My... other...name? '' He said confused.
'' Yeah, the one you get when you become at least 12 years old. ''
'' I never had another name... Why? ''
'' That means that you aren't from here!''
'' tap...tap...tap...'' Footsteps from around the corner.
'' Uh oh, I think we have to go somewhere else for now! Follow me! '' Hanako grabbed Vin's arm and ran to a club building full with people and a lot of different music.
'' I hope we are save here. '' She let loose of his arm after getting at a table and 2 chairs.
'' What's wrong, why were we running? '' He looked confused at Hanako and both sat down on a chair.
She went closer to Vin and wispered: '' Look, this is AuditionWorld, a world where every person becomes a dancer after getting a Guardian. You get your Guardian when you are 12 years old. The name of your Guardian is also the name you will use instead of your normal name. You, on the other hand, aren't from this world and so you don't have a Guardian. 1 of the rules in this world is that people who don't have a Guardian, with exceptions of 11 years and younger people, will get excecuted OR sent to a torturing place. ''
'' What!? How can I go back to my own world then? ''
'' Well... That's a question I don't know the answer of. I don't even know how you got here. ''
'' Then I gotta find out how to get back! ''
When Hanako wanted to answer his question, she noticed that the police entered the club.
'' Quick, follow me! '' She grabbed Vin's arm again, pulled him from his chair and ran to an empty dancing space.
'' Don't worry, just relax. '' She said and called upon her Guardian who summoned a barrier around them.
Vin saw nothing, except for white... a LOT of white.
'' COOL – ALREADY THERE YET 100 BPM, CHOREOGRAPHY '' a robot-ish voice said and Vin could finally see something else except for white. He saw the inside of the club except... It looked like a small square room and it was empty.
'' Hey... What is happening? ''
'' Don't worry, like I said, relax and listen to the music. ''
'' ALRIGHT NOW, CMON!!! '' A male voice said out of nowhere.
Hanako started dancing on the song. Vin saw Hanako dancing, so he tried to move... but he can't!
'' Hey... how come I can't dance! ''
'' That's because you don't have a Guardian! You need a Guardian to dance! ''
After hearing that, Vin just standed there, moving left and right on the beat.
''Poor guy, I'm going to help him get back to his world.'' Hanako thought while dancing.
''Shannon, you are a soft girl, that is why I am your Guardian.'' Shannon's Guardian told her.
''I know.'' Shannon thought smiling.
After 1 minute of dancing, Shannon looked at Vin.
''DID HE?!... No, it can't be!'' Shannon suddenly stopped dancing.
''Sorry about that, Shannon.'' Hanako told Shannon.
''It's ok, I broke your concentration.'' Shannon told Hanako.
After 30 seconds, Vin got Hanako's attention.
'' How... Wait... is it really true... eh? '' Vin was dancing and didn't noticed Shannon.
When the song ended, Vin saw Shannon confused.
'' Something wrong? '' He asked.
'' Yeah, you were dancing! ''
'' Is that weird or something? ''
'' Well... YEAH! I thought you aren't from this world! And if you aren't from the world, then you don't get a Guardian and without a Guardian, you can't dance like that! ''
'' Oh... Well...I was just listening to the music and after a while I had a warm and soft feeling and so I closed my eyes, because it felt like a good moment to do so. ''
'' That means that you... you got a Guardian! ''</div>
FAQS!:
Q: '' WTF is happening? ''
A:' This is the beginning, shut up! ''
Q: '' You didn't wrote how they were dancing! ''
A: '' Like I said, this is the beginning of my fanfic, I stil yet have to find out how I'm gonna write that out! ''
Q: '' Your writing style is weird... ''
A: '' Deal with it or don't read >.>. ''
Q:'' What are those '' italic words ?''
A: '' Those are things that people are THINKING ^^. ''
Blah, I suck in making a FAQ so meh lol. Profiles of the people are gonna be created soon!
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You could've at least let me finish explaining though. D:< *Bricked x10*<!--colorc--></span><!--/colorc-->