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Seats are over there, choco-locos are over here, and the stage is right here *points to where he is standing* Feel free to speak up and speak out your poetry here.

Here, I'll start with an opening piece that I wrote just a few minutes ago. It is a tribute to someone very special, I wrote it while thinking of how I felt about that person.

Try to figure out who it is...

~Tribute~

I remember your face, seeing it in my dream
Like a painful memory I remember
Why were you so faraway, so faded like a graying photograph
Why were some parts dark, were they from your tears?
But tears can show so much, more than pain could ever show
I embrace the chilling warmth of that memory
Wishing the memory could somehow bring you back to me
And we could be in each other's arms once more
But wishes are just that, and in the moonlight they shine
before becoming stars and shining down upon us
Leaving me with another memory of you
And leaving me to dream another dream
Tell me
Please
When I become a star, too
Will you be there
For me to shine upon?
~End~

I'll be posting some of my earlier stuff later.

Edit: Ok here's another right on the spot one...
I'm trying to make this one more accurate.

Why do you look at me that way?
With those eyes that glimmer like starlight?
With the raindrops falling from them?
Can't you tell me why?

Why do you hide from me those times?
Those times when all you wanted was love?
When you thought there was no more love?
Can't you tell me why?

Why do you cry with no one there?
While I am crying under the same sky?
Crying that these words can't reach you?
Can't you tell me why?

Why do you let go of my hand?
The hand that reaches out to touch you?
The arms that want to cradle you?
Can't you tell me why?

Why do I hurt the way I do?
Whenever I feel your broken soul?
Whenever I feel your broken heart?
Is it because of love?

[Tribute to the same person...:X]

UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE~

A Home for My Words

My words, these words
which I can't seem to get down on paper
Which so desperately try
to escape from the confines of my mind,
a dusty place with mazes and memories of strangers,
with dark alleyways and shadows in the night,
so unkind to those unwelcome,
need a home

They long for a shelter, a roof to cover
their crossed "t"s and dotted "i"s;
since my words are blind,
like an idealistic love poem
never sent to your high school sweetheart
who is now married
and regretting every moment;
They can't find their way
through my labyrinth of thoughts,
my prison of ideas
my purgatory of self,
and my words are deaf,
like a once-great musician
who might've lived his dream
had he not been caught up
ih his own fantasies,
now six feet under,
rotting from love's very own virus

But my words can feel
like a blind person or a deaf person can,
they can feel the chill
of the midnight rain
the burn
of the hellish sun
the joy
in young children's eyes
and the pain
of a broken heart

My words can speak;
speak to your soul
flow with your emotions
softly uttered from lips
that do not yet know
how to scream at the world;
but can sense its pulse
its heartbeat, its life force;
fading, like a voice in the distance,
whispering, scared of the nothingness

My words need a home
on the page of someone telling a story
everyone telling their stories
our stories
as we live on, filling the pages,
ending each chapter,
recounting our saga,
running in our heads,
and there they will stay,
like an Ever-winter of powdered snow,
gently falling to tell us
our words have a home
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Walking around saturday night
Keeping pace with the walking beat
Doing a little hiphop in my brain
Skipping along the lines

Thinking about the times where we were
Once upon a time
Walking along the same lines, the same beat
Once upon a time

Now I dance alone along these lines
In hope that you might look this way again
Maybe I'll move something in you
So you'll be back to walk with me.

Awesome

I love the beat to it ^^

both mentioned and the actual beat of it.

Hmmm wonder how many other poets are on AU...we'll see I guess

soon enough Oo soon enough.

like your poems..similar to what Im going through..*sigh* >.> life sucks doesn't it..?

haha. life doesnt suck till you make the best out of it.
i wouldnt say life is unfair, or even fair, its just the way you make it out to be ^_^

No one's calling for me at the door.
And the unpredictable won't bother anymore.
And the silence gets harder to ignore.
When I look straight ahead, theres nothing to see.
What's done is done, this life has got it's hold on me.
Just let it go, what now can never be.

I know I'll fall down,
But I'll also see the things, things of me.
But I know only the side of you and him that I could never be.
I can only try my best,
And what now can never be, but I'll love on still
You can count on me on that love.
That love.

I just had to get some emotions out....

so I had to write something, this one might be more emo than usual...

I wrote a song this time...

Sorry guys...

[Save Me]

The gray walls are closing in on me
While I'm hiding in my closet
From the scary monsters outside

My whole world is crashing down on me
While I'm cold under my covers
Wonderin' who'll be my savior

(Save me....)
(I need you...)

They're coming, they're coming
And there's no time left to run

Chorus:
How much time
Before the clock breaks
Before the heartaches
Cease to be?
How much time
Until the darkness
Until the pain is
Left behind me?
Hurry, please, come save me

(From me)

Is there nobody left to hear me?
To console my echoing cries?
Help me escape the emptiness

They're coming, they're coming
And there's nowhere left to turn

How much time
Before it all ends
Before the cracks mend
And heal once more?
How much time
Until I can go
Ubtil I can know
Who I'm waiting for?
Hurry, please, come save me

You're staring
You're fading
So close
Yet so far away...

[Repeat Chorus]

Heheheheh... ^_^ So cute~ It sounds just like you... ^_^ Glad to see you finally wrote... And yet...

*Breates in and gives a half-hearted shot*

Ss I read, do I feel?
Is my heart beating stronger?
Is a blush rising redder?
Is the answer already known?


(I'm a sucky poet... >_< but... I hope I got my point across ^_^)

EDIT:
O_o my sister apparently signed up on GoAudition and I didn't even realised I was logged in under her account! OMG! This post was written by Garlyle... >_<

nice one garlyle O.o;;;

point taken xD

You're poems are good. They kinda remind me of things I've gone through at some point or another....
They make my poemness look very terrible. Cool points to you! =^-^=

(This isn't Garlyle. But he posted on my account so I was all 'I wonder what I posted that actually wasn't me...?" And I felt the need to read it. So I did. Isn't that an exciting story? No? ;.

I like your poems Raian, they are, touching. Same goes for Juay, keep up the good work.

;_; They're so... Beautiful. Is this the same goofy Rai-san I talk to on Audition everyday? ^_^ Seems like I've discovered another side of you~ [Yay me.] And Juay-san and Gar-san are really good too :o I can't write a poem to save my life, but your poems are good enough to cover mine ^_^ [Pshaw~ Like I'll post something so terrible ;_;]

I look behind me,
Far beyond as I can see,
I see five others,
My sisters and brothers,
They are the leet five,
Dancers Prepare We're Going Live.

The music starts, 4-key it is,
Perfect, Perfect, soo far no miss,
Here it comes level 9,
The moment I shine,
Perfect, Perfect, oh no I slipped,
I lost the lead like I got jipped.

Try again, maybe maybe,
I lost the game, I cry like a baby,
I'l play once more, just to win this game,
Hopefully the outcome won't be the same.


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A girl like you is unique to me,
What's your name again? oh its Deedee,
Met you on audition, in a couples room,
Under the stars and into the blue moon.

We were new to eachother, new into couples,
We talked to eachother with just little muffles,
The game starts, We began to play,
And soon we "hearted" and seized the day.

We wanted five hearts,
So we can begin our lives, with a new fresh start,
We got it fast, with a certain Blast,
We officially coupled on a certain day,
Together were coupled forever we'll stay.

=D

OMG thats so beautiful im like bout to cry it was goregeous i mean god words cant explain it lol ok ill tell you a poem its gonna suck i worn you


Dancing Dancing the sky is blue
waiting for something to happen something new
all the rude boys around me dont even have a clue
my souls for dance my lifes for you.
And yet only one understands me through all my pain he knows my lifes for the game he captures my heart in a special way and yes you all know his names szasuke XD :lol: