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Here is my Fanfic! (if anyone cared) This idea was already in my head since every in kAu dressed up as Classmates! xD

- DONT EVER STEAL, RIP, MODIFY JUST A FEW WORDS AND CLAIM ITS YOURS! i'll totally kill you for that!
- and yes, this is another Audition fanfic! xD *bricked*

Anyway, here it is and i'll post Chapter 2 if i get good comments from this if not....i suck at story writing then! .-.

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So, normally I study in a normal school like everyone else but not until my parents wants to move somewhere else…Everyone that I know in here, I’ll miss them…No one ever liked moving to a new country, you’ll feel melancholic about it. So This is how it starts…

“Hey Nick!” my friend, Niki, called me. “oh hi Niki! How are you?” I replied. “oh I’m fine, have you done your Economic homework?” she answered with a smirk.
“uhmm…oh snap! I forgotten!”
“haha, knew you did. You should really start doing your homework nowadays and stop playing that Audition Dancing game!”
“haha, I know but I couldn’t help it. It’s too addicting!
“anyway, I have to attend Biology class”
“ok then! Have fun!”
“hehe, I wish I could but the teacher has this thing of magically making the class falls asleep!”
Soon we exchange Good-byes and went to our classes. Nothing interesting happened today until I went home.

“Mom, I’m home now!” I called as I open the door. I went to my bedroom to change my clothes and go to the Dining room for dinner. I was in a good mood that time until my dad told me we’re going to move.
“…so that’s what happened to my classmate after the teacher got mad at him”
“uh…son…I have to tell you something…” he said in a concerned expression
“yah sure, what is it?” I replied.
“how much do you like it here?”
“…very much because of all my friends I love is here”
“oh ok…remember the time you said that you always wanted to visit Korea?”
“yah! I want to go to that convention centre that’s has Audition!”
“well…that’s good. By the way…ever heard of an Audition School?”
“uh…no…why?” I was starting to get a little suspicious.
“that’s because we’re moving to Korea this Saturday”
I was totally flabbergasted when he said that…I don’t know weather to feel happy, sad, surprised but I know thing out of this…I’ll be leaving all my friends here! i don’t even know how to reply either…
“why!? Since when have you planned this!?” I meant to said it in a calm voice but nevermind.
“im sorry honey, your father was just accepted a job there as an Animator” my mom answered instead.
“yah..im sorry. I was already accepted last month but I don’t know how to say it to you properly…”
“…” I felt as if the world had exploded…I never wanted to leave all my friends here! I might as well get all their phone numbers and email addresses tomorrow, Friday then...
“don’t worry, I heard the school teaches you Pop Dance! And I know you’ve been playing this Audition game.”
“really?” my mood starts to brighten up.
“yah! I promised that you’ll make loads of more friends but I know that they’ll never replace your old ones.”

I started to feel a little better because I finally get to learn how to Dance! I just hope the people are kind in there…

Enjoy~!
Nice starting XD
Ice_cream Wrote:Nice starting XD

is that a good thing or not? plus is it interesting!? O_O

gimme me more comments! *bricked* lol i'll start with Chapter 2 then
Nice starting for your story!! xD

rahhs I envy you guys >.>
My story writing sucks!!>.<
*went to little corner and cries*
OMG I worship you,posz chapz twoz plzzz *worship* *lying with a innocent look*
Ok,I am just kidding.It is good,but.......
either you have a super-audition addiction (friends=)*)*%????,didn't you say you love them?Sound like the world has exploded so quickly that you feel sooooo fine.*cough*)

or

You are cold-blooded.

or

You hated your friends in fact and plotting to make them into Cha-shui bun like the HK urban legends(In other way,cannibals.)

Anyway

Everything is very nice.

What will happen in the Audition School?

*I know,you get expelled on the first morning,first minute?Awww....Lucky you : 3*Anyone for a bet for 0.00001 den?*
@ mekiko: you dont suck! D: actually, i never read your storied but i know you dont suck! just get inpsired from other story books!

@HarpyPerne: lol thank you and YES I DO LOVE MY FRIENDS! and i never heard of that urban legend...o.o

btw here is Chapter 2!

<!--sizeo:3--><span style="font-size:12pt;line-height:100%"><!--/sizeo--><!--coloro:#FF0000--><span style="color:#FF0000"><!--/coloro-->Chapter 2: Audition Land<!--colorc--></span><!--/colorc--><!--sizec--></span><!--/sizec-->

I couldn’t hold it in school. All my friends were shocked, sad but some where happy, saying that I’m lucky enough o move to Korea! “Home of Video Games” many people call Korea like that cause of an obvious fact that Korea makes the best games!

Niki was the first to hug me when he heard what I said. “oh my gosh…Nick, im gonna miss you a lot…” she sobbed
”I know…I’ll miss you too…” I replied, nearly going to cry.
“I know that I should be happy but…” she trailed off
“but…what?”
“but….you were my closest friend I had in here…” she started to cry and hugs me tighter. I was speechless and I hugged her anyway.
“I’ll promise to email you” I said, trying to make her happy. She just smiled and released me. “you know…your dream might come true that you wanted to be a Dancer.” Her mood brightened.
“yah…i hopes so…” I said, smiling back.

After school, all my friends were exchanging Good-byes and hugging me. I got many of their email and phone numbers, even though I have to buy a card for it but whatever. I reached home and found most of my stuff were packed and ready to go.
“Tomorrows the big day!” my dad cheered happily and he stuff his underwear in his own suitcase.
”uhmm…honey…that’s my underwear!” my mom shouted at him and quickly grabbed her clothes. “oh sorry, im just excited that we’re going to live in Korea and have a new life!”
I just sat silently and packed the rest of my belongings on my own suitcase, don’t know how to reply or start a conversation. “ok, are we all ready? We’re leaving first thing in the morning! Chop chop!” he said after finishing packing his own belongings.
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We packed our cases in my dad’s car and im having a final soon at where I grew up. A tear ran down my face as I was having flashbacks. We reached the airport and as usual, my dad is always pissed off at the security of the place…Peace was in the Plane and until we reached Korea.
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we had troubles cause my dad losted the map and we don’t know how to speak in Korean and it was hell…it was already starting to get a bit dark.
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Finally we reached to the place we’re suppose to go! Audition Land! The minute we enter the gates, between the dancing world and the realistic world, music immediately reached to my ears. Pure Korean pop music, rap, rock and Japanese music! I can see people dressed up for the dance of their lives. There was a huge Sudio Station in the middle of Town and I saw a school right next to it, I was thinking maybe that’s where im gonna study… I also saw a mall and there was many, many people around it, I guess shopping is essential in here. Even our house was nice, there was a little dancing room. A stylish radio that is waiting to play some music in years and best is the wardrobe! They already have some clothes it in for us! And I went over excited and started to try some on!
“Honey…did they really reserve all this for us?” my mom asked as she unpack our stuff.
“of course they did! This is just to good to be true!” I replied instead with my excited voice tone!
“yup they did and now…Nick…your school starts in 2 days, starting from now on.
“really!? That fast! Cool! Cant wait to see what’s its like to study in Audition School!!”

suddenly, there was a knock at the door and I answered it. A mailman, dressed very stylish for some reason, gave me a box with a letter attached to it and went away. I opened it because it said it was for me.


Dear NickCole,

Congratulations for being chosen at our school of Dance! We’ll be waiting for you at 7:00PM, Monday! We already have your set of clothes in the box, feel free to try them on if you wish.

Audition School.”

This was just getting better and better!


btw just to let you know, this is my first time actually writing a NON-HORROR fanfic! .-. i wish i have a cheerful dad! xD *bricked
Lol..Maybe you'll change your mind after you read my stories.=/
They are really sucky =/
My stories are all like..relationship like that =/
Haha..-,-

Things are getting more and more interesting in your story~
xD I'll give you 5/5 if I could rate..

And I shall rate mine 1/5 xD
[thats the rating I get -,- Seriously..]
<!--coloro:#000099--><span style="color:#000099"><!--/coloro-->It's awesome so far Nick! Keep up the work, can't wait to see Chapter 3! :3<!--colorc--></span><!--/colorc-->
o.0 *die*
(Note:This is netural.)
Is the people in Audition Land on drugs or something o.0?
(Note:This is netural.)
Btw,not bad.I'd think it is hard sleeping though....
(Note:This is postive.)
@ everyone: thanks guys that you liked my fanic but im not sure if i could carry on .-. im having too much Writer's block and im not sure how the story should go, plus not much people are viewing it .-.

ooor...maybe im just to emo today...
I don't think having Writer's block equal Emo.
Seriously.(Reverse)
wats a sudio station? o.o

nice story so far, i actually kinda has a school setting idea for a story after the classroom stage on kau came out...but i never bothered to write an actually story out XD gj~

Anonymous

I think he meant "studio station?" ^^ Typo?

And Nick, that's awesome, you put effort to write something so nice~ Keep up the good work~ ^w^
ok guys, thanks for your comments and support! here's Chapter 3! seems short but anyway enjoy! ^_^

<!--sizeo:3--><span style="font-size:12pt;line-height:100%"><!--/sizeo-->Chapter 3: The Audition School<!--sizec--></span><!--/sizec-->

The day, Monday, had finally came! I had fun roaming around in AudiSquare, the place where the fountain is, and I saw loads of people dancing in the streets&I started daydreaming that I would be a good dancer as them. Anyway, I am already in my school uniform, the one the school set for me, and im on my way!
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I noticed that a lot of people were staring at me&I was starting to feel nervous until I was near the school. There was a gate keeper in front with some sort of gun&I guess some people were violating the laws before. As I continue walking, one of the guards stopped me, Hey, kid whats your Username?
username&.? I asked, nervously.
you cant get in without a username, kid
uhmm..i was invited here, sir&
oh&do you have that invitation with you?
yah&here
oh ok, thats good. Here, sign this card, it will show that you study here
oh ok& I signed the card with my name
ok now&what will your name going to be used?
uhmmm&NickCole thats the only thing I could think of&
ok then, heres your card he said, as he was giving me my School ID card.
I went pass the gate and it was awesome&the school looked like the giant Studio but bigger.

Once inside, I heard a mix of Japanese and Korean pop music in my ears and the beat of the song is pulsing on my chest. This is gonna be awesome I thought. Before I could walk to the corridors, two people ran passed me, a boy with blue hair and a girl with a hand band. Sorry! coming through! they shouted as they passed and disappeared to one of the classroom. I continued my way to the hallways till I meet this person. hi there! she waved at me. I have no other reaction but wave and smile. hi&who are you? I asked. Im Tasha she replied with a smile.

Come with me, Ill teach you how to fit in here she said and I followed her. So&you're new here arent you? she started. uhmm&yah, this place is pretty cool I replied and I couldnt think of anything else to say. We finally reached the room and it was labeled Tutorial on the door. She let me go in first and I saw a 2 people in the room with me. I guess theyre new also. She stand in front of the room and said ok&.get ready to dance!.

There was a 8key dance mat on the floor and it seems VERY similar like DDR but instead, we have to step the middle to finish our move. First, Tasha showed us some of the moves and it was easy to follow but then it goes a bit more harder in as we progress to perform better moves. Very good! Tasha said happily but it sounded very sarcastic. There was a screen in front of me to show the arrows to step on and the perfection of the steps.

After the Tutorial, Tasha greeted us good luck about the school and the people around us. As I was walking to an other room I saw, I bumped into the people before. oh hello, are you new? the girl with a white headband asked me curiously. uhmm...yes, I just finished my tutorial. I replied.
oh thats cool. Wanna join with me? she asked
yah sure! But im not very good yet I replied.
its ok, im sorta new myself by the way. Follow me!
oh ok. I said as I followed her through the music filled corridors.
omg i wonder who those 2 people are! cant wait for chapter 4 :o
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