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<!--coloro:#000099--><span style="color:#000099"><!--/coloro-->I think I know who those two people are~ *Bricked*

Awesome job! ^^ Keep writing, this is really awesome. XD<!--colorc--></span><!--/colorc-->
Woow~ nice story ;D i finally got the time to read it lol and ZOMG who can those people be?! XD write moore i like it hehe
Thanks for your support guys! ^_^

Here's Chapter 4 now! i finally had an idea of the story.

Chapter 4: Two new friends

So I entered the room where Hanako lead me. I saw a person in blue clothes and blue spiky hair behind the DJ. Hi Vince! We have a new player! Hanako said to the person.
Oh hello! Welcome to audition school! My name is Vpower he said.
Oh hi, im NickCole I said.
Nice to meet you, Nick! Vpower replied with a smile.
Hes new so take it slow, ok Vee? Hanako said to him.
ok then&let me find a suitable song for hi--found it! Vee said out loud.
Get ready, Nick and Good luck! Hanako said.

The room started to changed slowly and the music is growing as the room changes. I noticed it was getting darker and colder then it was before. There was chairs fallen over and desks all rusted and broken, some were moving for no reason at all. I also noticed a Woman in Black walking by the door and it doesnt seem that her legs were moving at all! I had chills for a second. Hanako and Vpower is calmly ready for the music and dance. A screen came down slowly in front of us and there
were two big speakers at the sides.
<div align="center">AUDITION  LETS START IT. CHOREOGRAPHY</div>
It was said on the big screen in front of us. Me, Hanako and Vpower was standing in a semi-circle and I started to see my name on the screen and an arrow under it. Not to mention a bead going along a thin bar with a white square near the end of the bar, it was in the middle of the screen at the bottom. Our hands started to
glow also for some reason. Hanako noticed my shockness and said dont worry, just move your hands according to the arrows shown on the screen. And she smiled. Music was was loud enough to play and the bead started to move. ok get ready! Vpower shouted in the music.
<div align="center">ALL RIGHT NOW, CMON!</div>
I started to move my hand according to the arrow showing under my name in the
screen and I got a COOL for it. I started to feel the music a little more and moved my body along with my hands as they follow the arrows. I followed an arrow but then I accidently move my hand to the wrong direction and a MISS appeared
next to my name. I stood there waiting for the arrows to appear and they didnt appear until the bead passed the white spot for the 2nd time. I did pretty well until I got to the Finish Move, where it was a weird looking red arrow. I moved my hand to where it was pointing and I missed. huh? I said out loud. Hanako and Vpower was doing a cool BreakDance when they did the Finish Move. After the song, the screen showed us the performance on how we did.
<div align="center">Vpower  345,738
Hanako  310,000
NickCole  198,983</div>
well&you did pretty good Nick! Better then how I did during my first try with 10 misses. Hanako said. Yah great job, nick! Vpower said. heh, Thanks. Bigginer;s Luck I guess? I replied blushing a bit. oh, by the way Nick, try finishing all the arrows before the bead passes the white spot and the red arrow is a Reflected Arrow, meaning, move your hand at the opposite direction of where its facing, got it? Hanako said. yah, got it. I replied.
Well&That was a good match, play some time again soon? Vpower said, happily.
Oh yah! I nearly forgot! Nick, do you have a Audicator? Hanako asked.
uhmm&whats that? I asked. I wonder if the receptionist forgot to give me something&
Its a little device where you can contact others when theyre not in the same
place as you are, it also works outside the school. Let me get you one. Be right
back! She said and ran off the room.
Well&shes fast I said out loud without noticing&
Yup, she is. Vpower heard me. So&when have you joined Audition School?
today. I replied.
&you serious? he looked at me in a weird sort of way.
Yah, whyd you asked?
well..cause&you already did good enough at a 99 BPM and I already found it hard the first time I tried it&
Really? Maybe it really is beginners luck for me then.
That or youre born for this.
born?
yah I heard if your already good enough at the first try then maybe your rein
back! hanako interrupted Vpower. Heres your Audicator, Nick and he handed
me a small device.
Thanks.
I already added my name in your Friends List after I bought it. You should add Vpower also. Plus its touch screen! She said.
Really? Cool! I tapped the Add friend icon on the button left of the screen and
soon I got two of theyre names in my list.
Ok, I got you both now.
Ok cool! Well&Its time for us to go now, its almost time for us to go home.
Hanako said to me.
Yah see ya later nick! Lets play again tomorrow! Bye Vpower waved and gone out the door with Hanako.

<div align="center">End of Chapter 4~!</div>

FAQ~:

Q1) The description of the danes is LAAMME!
Ans: YOU'RE MOM LAME! that's not even a question so shut up.

Q2) What the hell!? Audicator!? what kind of name is that!?
Ans: Audition + Communicator = Audicator! since your dumb enough to think harder.

Q3) I see some grammar mistakes and some spelling also.
Ans: well...point them out and inform me!

Q4) What the hell is a Reflected Arrow?
Ans: Chance/Mirrrored/Evil Twin Arrows...duh!
a waticator? xD.

Nice first dance Big Grin.
Weeeeeh, Move your hands to the left and to the right and don't forget to move up!
<!--coloro:#000099--><span style="color:#000099"><!--/coloro-->YAY NICK! Big Grin What was Vpower about to say? O: *Bricked* Awesome chapter, and keep up the nice work! :3<!--colorc--></span><!--/colorc-->
Seem that in ALL fanfics here the main character WOULD BE ULTRA TALENTED at Audition : D
*morale boost as everyone here are soo confident*
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Audicator?Sound like some portable Audition-DJ set instead.Also...wtf is danes!?Biggner' lucks!?Cool,special skill from events XD
HarpyPerne Wrote:Seem that in ALL fanfics here the main character WOULD BE ULTRA TALENTED at Audition : D
*morale boost as everyone here are soo confident*
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Audicator?Sound like some portable Audition-DJ set instead.Also...wtf is danes!?Biggner' lucks!?Cool,special skill from events XD

dammit..there i got with the little errors again....i often miss the letter of some words...so yah..its suppose to be 'dance' and 'Beginner's luck'...x_x sorry for the misspellings.
Umm,why do you say "sorry" for misspellings? XD
We are just having casual fanfics here not legal document : D
And,your Audition School is really quite different.On the postive side,it is refreshing,on the negative side,nothing much XD
@Harpy: I am trying to make my fanfic different from the est but still has the same concept, dancing! 8D

Anyway here is chapter 5!

<!--sizeo:4--><span style="font-size:14pt;line-height:100%"><!--/sizeo-->Chapter 5: First Rank-Teacher Battle.<!--sizec--></span><!--/sizec-->

After that match with Hanako and Vpower, I couldnt wait for school again. The next day, I jumped off my bed and got dressed for another day at school. I listen to the Music beating in my ear drum as I go to school with my scooter.

I reached school and went straight to my classroom and wonder where my 2 friends were. During class, I learn a bunch of other modes like Beat up, which is like DDR but instead there were the diagonal arrows at the sides and there is no up and down arrows on the mat. Very fun, the teacher showed us how to do Beat up and he was very good at it. Only like around 1 or 2 misses and when I got a chance to try it out, I fail at the first try. It was ok though; I just have to practice more. After a few matches with my classmates, And I lost apparently. The teacher also taught us how to use the Audicator. It can show us how to contact one another even when were in different rooms or places. It can also show us the level and rank that we are currently in, right now Im level 5, a Stiffy. We can also use it to buy stuff in the Mall, the money is automatically sent to your Audicator after the matches, also the EXP we earn. We also did a few more matches.

After the match, I noticed that my Audicator is beeping out loud. it said that Im level 6 but in order to rank up, I need to beat a Rank-Teacher. I asked the teacher where I can take the match. The Audicator already labeled out which room I should be going to. Before I entered the room, I got contact from Hanako and Vee at a 3-way line.
I heard that youre gonna take your first License with a Rank-Teacher! Hanako said.
yah, by the way, your first Rank-Teacher is Eric. Hes pretty much the EASIEST Teacher there is. Vee reclaimed.
the Mode is Freestyle I guess, so that means you can do ANY moves you likeas long as it exist, though&once you moved your hand to any direction, it will show you the rest of the arrows at you have to do, so follow that. Dont worry, the song is slow anyway. Hanako explain to me the things I needed to do.
oh ok. I replied, couldnt think of anything else better to say.
well&we wish we could watch but im sorta in a middle of a match here so&good luck~! Hanako wished me luck.
yah Good luck, Nick~! Vee said.
ok Thanks guys! Ill go my best I replied and we exchanged Good-byes.
I took a deep breath before entering the room.
I entered the room and it appeared to any other normal room there is except for a teacher at the end of the room wit a Deejay. I noticed that he was wearing purplish clothes and his pants were way up high as they should normally be. I walked forward when he greeted me.
Why, hello Nick *snort* He waved his hands at me.
uhmmm&hello. I replied nervously. I was trying to stop myself from laughing.
I am your Rank-Teacher for you to Rank up to a Novice Dancer. In order to do that, you have to beat me in a little match. *snort* He explained to me.
oh ok& I said, got nothing else to say anyway.
By the way, my name is Eric. There is some requirements that you also need to accomplish while trying to beat me at the same time. He explained further.
Without further delay, Lets begin! He pushed a button on the Deejay.
<div align="center">AUDITION  NEW YORK. 96BPM. FREESTYLE BATTLE</div>
It was said on the big screen in front of us. The stage looks like a Studio with huge speakers and are moving along with the music. The music started to kick in and Eric looked so confident next to me. I also saw the requirements on the screen&;
<div align="center">Perfect: 10
xPerfect: 2
Score: 200,000</div>

I started to panic a bit because it looks like I have to so much. I tried to relax a bit.
<div align="center">ARE YOU READY? START!</div>
I saw that there were no arrows on the screen and I was about to panic for a sec until I remembered that Hanako told me. I moved my hand and a bunch of arrows appeared on the screen, so I followed them and did a move. Eric next to me was getting all perfects most of the time and beating my score. Without losing confident, I concentrate and did my part. I missed the Finishing Move which totally ruined it. At the end, I somehow gotten all the requirements needed and I somehow beaten Eric by 1 point. The score was held on the screen for us to see;
<div align="center">NickCole  205,985
Eric  205,984</div>
Wow. Nice job, Nick! Eric said to me. now you can Rank up! I saw my new title on my Audicator; Novice Dancer. wow cool! I said out loud. Now you have to move to another section for your Rank. Here Ill show you the way. He sent me a little map to my Audicator and was on my way.

As soon as I reached for the place, I saw many feel fashioned dancers and they looked good. When I was about to find a room for me to practice the more faster songs, someone called me Hey you! NickCole! I see youre a freshman here!
uhmm&yah. I replied slowly.
bet you can't beat me you n00b! he teased me.
I have no idea how to replied and I was insulted. Time to teach this loser a lesson. I followed him to his room.
<div align="center">End of chapter 5~!</div>

FAQ:
Q1) Rank-teachers? o_o
Ans: Yes, Rank-Teachers. They're like license.

Q2) OMGWTF HAVE YOU DONE WITH ERIC!? HE'S NOT A NERD! *sob*
Ans: i thought he looked like one the first time i saw him Global audition. We're all affected by first impression anyway.

Q3) Why didn't you describe the dance battle more? TELL ME OR DIE!
Ans: Simple. Lazyness! SO LET THAT LAZY BRAIN OF YOURS WORKING AND JUST PICTURE THE BATTLE THINGIE! *get bricks*

BTW BEWARE OF MISTAKES IN MY FANFIC! THEY'RE INVADING...
nice ^^.

You should just let Nick laugh at Eric :3.
Vpower Wrote:nice ^^.

You should just let Nick laugh at Eric :3.

“Why, hello Nick *snort*” He waved his hands at me.
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!" I couldn't help myself but laugh and i was already rolling on the floor. "HAHAHAHAHHAHA CAN'T...BREATH.....HAHAHAHAHAHHA"
"..." Eric just stared at me almost hurted and twitching...

there? more better? xD

anywya thanks! :3
<!--coloro:#000099--><span style="color:#000099"><!--/coloro-->Nice Nick! Big Grin I love how everyone's making Eric a jerk / nerd lol.<!--colorc--></span><!--/colorc-->
In fact I think Eric was having trouble with his nose instead o.0(That snorting WAS unpolite?)
What a ranking match you have........
Eric proably just stand and watch XD
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