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<span style="color:#000099">Yeah, this is my fanfic for Audition. xD Before I post it, I will say this:

<span style="font-size:14pt;line-height:100%">If ANYONE takes my fanfic without my permission, I will <strike>find where you live, rip off your arms, and bludgeon you to death</strike> get my <a href="http://www.goaudition.org/forums/index.php?s=&showtopic=1041&view=findpost&p=65418" target="_blank">bricooza</a>, and repeatidly pelt you with bricks until you DIE.</span>

Now that that's out of the way, here's the prologue. ^^ I'll post chapter one if I get a few comments on this. xD

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<span style="font-size:12pt;line-height:100%"><div align="center">Prologue</div></span>

“I hate you, you ungrateful child!” a father screamed at his daughter. “You shouldn’t have been born! Die! Do everyone a favor and just die!” The father continued hitting and kicking his daughter until a woman walked in the pitch black room.

“What are you doing to her!?” the woman screamed. “I’m treating her like she deserves to be treated!” The man snapped back. “You’re drunk again, aren’t you!?” The woman ran towards the child, picked her up, and ran out of the house.

The woman continued to run until she reached another house. “You’ll be safe now...” She tore a small picture in half, and left one half with the unconscious child. “I’ll give the other half to your brother, since he probably won’t remember you...” She rang the doorbell, knocked on the door, and left her four year old child behind.

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<a href="http://www.goaudition.org/forums/index.php?s=&showtopic=3981&view=findpost&p=62033" target="_blank">Chapter One ~ The Beginning</a>

<a href="http://www.goaudition.org/forums/index.php?s=&showtopic=3981&view=findpost&p=62088" target="_blank">Chapter Two ~ The Actual Tutorial</a>

<a href="http://www.goaudition.org/forums/index.php?s=&showtopic=3981&view=findpost&p=65002" target="_blank">Chapter Three ~ License and Battle Party</a>

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<div align="center"><span style="font-size:14pt;line-height:100%">Character Profiles</span></div>

Hanako93
Name: Hanako Namida (Real name unknown)
Nickname(s): Hanako93
Age: 14
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown
Height: 4'11"
Siblings: One brother (Unknown)
Rank: Novice
Favorite Food: Bread and candy canes
Friends: Destati, Soujiro
Rivals: None
Summary: Hanako is your basic 14-year old. She hates studying, and only joined Audition to get away from school. She’s enjoying it so far, except for a few dumbasses. She's very cheerful, but she holds things inside a lot... and one of these days she may snap because of it.
Picture: <a href="http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/2381/hawtpicok0af5.jpg" target="_blank">http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/2381/hawtpicok0af5.jpg</a>

Destati
Name: Destati Sakurai
Nickname(s): Destati, Destato Potato
Age: 17
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Gold
Height: 5'9"
Siblings: One brother (Sosuke)
Rank: Clubber
Favorite Food: Strawberries
Friends: Hanako93, Soujiro, Vpower, -ICE_CrEaM-
Rivals: Everyone except the people mentioned in friends.
Summary: Destati is like an older brother to his friends. He helps whenever someone needs help, and expects nothing in return (Most of the time). If you make him mad, I would suggest running. Towards the next country. Like, now.
Picture: <a href="http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/6214/destatopotatosn2.jpg" target="_blank">http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/6214/destatopotatosn2.jpg</a>

Soujiro
Name: Soujiro Arashi
Nickname(s): Soujiro, Soujiro-san
Age: 18
Hair Color: Purple
Eye Color: Green
Height: 5'9"
Siblings: None
Rank: Novice (Amateur from Korean Audition)
Favorite Food: Ramen
Friends: Hanako93, Destati, Vpower, NickCole, Zomgwtfbbq, SilverDust, Kuze, -ICE_CrEaM-, Peach
Rivals: Dumbasses who think they’re better than everyone else.
Summary: Soujiro may seem cold and quiet at first, but he’s actually a really nice person. He’s very protective of his friends, and he hates people that think they’re better than everyone else just because they’ve been around longer.
Picture: <a href="http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff231/Hanako93/Souji-1.jpg" target="_blank">http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff231/H...o93/Souji-1.jpg</a>

Vpower
Name: Hikari Shirane
Nickname(s): Vpower, V, Nii-san, Onii-chan
Age: 16
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown
Height: 5'2"
Siblings: Unknown
Rank: Clubber
Favorite Food: Cookies and chocolate
Friends: Destati, Soujiro, NickCole, -ICE_CrEaM-, Kuze
Rivals: None
Summary: Vpower is a really, really, really hyper person. He’s hardly ever upset, and if he is he hides it. He literally bounces off walls if you mention either coffee or pie, God forbid you use them both in the same sentence when he’s around. He doesn’t like talking about his family.
Picture: <a href="http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff231/Hanako93/Vpower4.jpg" target="_blank">http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff231/H...o93/Vpower4.jpg</a>

NickCole
Name: Nicole Benedict
Nickname(s): Nick, Peanut
Age: 14
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Caramel
Height: 5'4"
Siblings: None
Rank: Novice
Favorite Food: Sushi and pizza
Friends: Soujiro, Vpower, -ICE_CrEaM-, Kuze
Rivals: None
Summary: Nick is pretty much like all the other teenagers but has a special gift... He can dance! He had a bad childhood relationship with his dad. He is often kind and hyper, but inside he’s depressed about what happened to him long ago. He has an obsession for peanuts, hence the nickname.
Picture: <a href="http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j93/NickCole12/Picture092-1.jpg" target="_blank">http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j93/Nick...icture092-1.jpg</a>

-ICE_CrEaM-
Name: Hideaki Hashimoto
Nickname(s): -ICE_CrEaM-, Ice
Age: 13
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Brown
Height: 5'4"
Siblings: Two sisters
Rank: Amateur
Favorite Food: McDonald’s
Friends: Destati, Soujiro, Vpower
Rivals: None
Summary: A 13 year-old who likes school, but hates homework. He plays Audition just to make friends and dance. Like Soujiro, when you first meet him he may seem quiet, but after you get to know him he can get pretty hyper (But not as hyper as Vpower).
Picture: <a href="http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n128/lXWeiRenXl/Croppedchar.png" target="_blank">http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n128/lX...Croppedchar.png</a>

Kuze
Name: Choi Eh-Sun
Nickname(s): Kuze
Age:23
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Brown
Height: 5'4"
Siblings: None
Rank: Clubber
Favorite <strike>Food</strike> Drink: Coffee (Black)
Friends: Soujiro, NickCole, Vpower, Zomgwtfbbq, Peach
Rivals: Idiots
Summary: Reporter for a Real life Newspaper, Plays Audition in her leisure time to relax off the clock. Relatively nice except to people who rub her the wrong way. Loses her cool quite frequently.
Picture: <a href="http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z105/Kuze77/2007_8_17_0213.jpg" target="_blank">http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z105/Ku...7_8_17_0213.jpg</a>

Peach
Name: Naoko Kato
Nickname(s): Peach
Age: 15
Hair Color: Black / Brown
Eye color: Purple
Height: 5'3"
Siblings: Two brothers (Also in Audition)
Rank: Freedom
Favorite Food: Ice cream and cookies
Friends: Everyone (Usually hangs out with Skayte)
Rivals: None
Summary: Average 15 year old, who loves to play videos games. Usually a happy-go-lucky person, but when angered, beware! She likes to go to school and hang out with friends, and LOVES to ballroom.
Picture: <a href="http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e317/AznBlueDestiny/newbabypeach-klau.jpg" target="_blank">http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e317/Azn...ypeach-klau.jpg</a>

stephlicious
Name: Stephanie
Nickname(s): stephlicious
Age: 21
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown
Height: 5'2"
Siblings: None
Rank: Backup Dancer
Favorite Food: Pizza
Friends: Kuze, ChopstickMan, Killha, and all the classmates
Rivals: None
Summary: Steph is a 21-year old college student who spends her time in Audition instead of studying. She's fairly cheerful and would rather get along with everyone and just dance for fun. However, she is obsessed with Battle Parties and also has a penchant for changing her outfit, oh, every fifteen minutes or so.
Picture: <a href="http://www.vicious-mb.net/audifanficpic.jpg" target="_blank">http://www.vicious-mb.net/audifanficpic.jpg</a>

Ryu
Name: Ryuhou Tairen
Nickname(s): Ryu
Age: 14
Hair Color: Blue
Eye Color: Black
Height: 5'8"
Siblings: Unknown
Rank: Novice
Favorite Food: Pizza
Friends: None
Rivals: None
Summary: Ryuhou is a pretty mysterious person. He’s in Audition to get away from stress, and school. He likes to make friends, but he doesn't talk much. When he does talk though, he can be completely random.
Picture: <a href="http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/6631/ryuhoudy0.jpg" target="_blank">http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/6631/ryuhoudy0.jpg</a></span>

O>O*no comment*

@Dante - :lol:

Another fanfic.....yay~!! It's soundin good so far, but until chapter 1 is up, I can't really comment on it XD (sounds like a modified harry potter XD)

PhoenixIce Wrote:(sounds like a modified harry potter XD)

<span style="color:#000099">I dunno if that's good or bad. o.0 Anywaaay:

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<div align="center"><span style="font-size:12pt;line-height:100%">Chapter One: The Beginning</span></div>

“Alright, Aunt Eiko! I’m off!” a girl shouted to her aunt. “Wait!” Eiko caught up to the girl. “Are you sure you want to do this, Hanako?” Hanako turned toward her aunt and smiled. “Yeah, it’ll be a good opportunity to meet a lot of people, plus I get to ditch school.” Eiko laughed and smiled. “Just be careful... You might run into the person that–“ ”I’ll be fine.” Eiko looked at Hanako. “I don’t know what happened when I was four, but I’m pretty sure I won’t run into whoever... you know.” She then took a small picture out from her pocket and looked at it. “I just wish I knew who this boy was. Anyway, see ya later, I’m off to Audition!”

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“Wow... I didn’t expect it to be this big...” Hanako stared at the huge building in the middle of Audition Town. “Well, I’ve come this far... Might as well go in...” Hanako entered the building and saw a bunch of people waiting in line. “Hey, are you new?” Hanako jumped and turned around to see who was talking to her. “Those people are waiting to take their license, something you won’t have for a while. Let’s get you registered.”

The lady brought Hanako over to a desk and sat down behind it. “Okay, what do you want your nickname to be?” Hanako stood there thinking about a name. “Umm... I’m not good at making up names, can I just use Hanako?” The lady typed the name into the computer. “Sorry, Hanako is taken.” “Hanako-chan then?” “Taken.” Hanako was starting to get ticked off. “Hanako-san? Taylor? Taylor-chan? Taylor-san? Taylor93?” “All taken.” “GRAWRGH!! Hanako93?” “Not taken.” The lady typed the rest of the information while giving Hanako a card. “This will be your ID. Don’t lose it, or else people can use it to rob you.” Hanako stared at the lady. “People are actually like that here...?” “Some. Anyway, come with me, I’ll be your instructor. You can call me Tasha!”

The two women proceeded into a room. “Okay, first you gotta feel the beat of the song. Then you just get used to it and dance! Well, have fun!” Tasha left and Hanako was left dumbfounded. “What the... THAT was the tutorial!? What the hell!?” Hanako went into the room she was in recently, but could not find Tasha anywhere. “Are you Hanako?” Hanako turned around to see a man dressed in red. “Y-yes?” “Tasha asked, well told, me to give this to you.” The man gave her a letter and left. “...He was cute.” She then opened the letter.

“To Hanako93:

Hey, I just remembered, go into the mall and ask for the beginner outfit. Good luck, and have fun! ^(^0^)^

<div align="center">~ Tasha</div>”

“...Damn, I thought it was going to be an actual tutorial. I guess I’ll have to figure this out myself...” Hanako walked outside the building and looked at the red and pink sky. “Something tells me a crappy tutorial is going to be the least of my worries.”

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<div align="center"><span style="font-size:12pt;line-height:100%">Chapter One FAQ</span></div>

Q: Who is Eiko based off of?
A: No one. Eiko is my own character, she is not based off anyone I know.

Q: How will licenses work in the story?
A: This will be explained in Chapter 2.

Q: Who is Tasha?
A: Remember that annoying tutorial lady that spoke too much when you made a new character? Yeah, that’s her. She didn’t have a name so my sister (Destato Potato) made it up.

Q: What was with the name taken thing? Was that your sorry attempt at humor?
A: Believe it or not, the name taken thing actually happened to me when I first started sAU.

Q: ...That was a short tutorial. Wtf?
A: That’s basically what the tutorial was to me when I first started. It didn’t help me AT ALL. All it told me to do was press buttons. It didn’t teach me about modes, about licenses, about 8k, about chance, etc. I had to learn all that through loading screens and actually playing by myself.

Q: Who was the man in red towards the end?
A: Redspin.

Q: Which Audition does this story take place in?
A: Right now, AuditionSEA. It will eventually move to American Audition (Depends if I feel like writing about my time there, if I do decide to write about it, it will only last one or two chapters). Even if I skip aAU, it WILL go to Korean Audition no matter what.

Q: How will that work?
A: Read my story to find out!

Q: Can I be in your story!?
A: Maybe, maybe not. Depends if I know you well enough, and if I even like you. (GoAudition people: I know most of you so don’t worry about asking me if you want to be in it. Tongue

I’ll probably say no to only one or two people, and basically everyone that knows me will know who I’ll say no to. xD)

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This better work now. D:</span>

Yay you posted ittt ^_^

And anyone takes this I keel -_-;

I already read it but I'll say it again, it's very nice ^_^ Beats mines by alot XD

psh screw killing, if anyone takes it, I ban them on the spot Tongue

-Claps-

I love it so far XD

Me too

. (And Psssh I've already read chapter 2 pssssh) xD

<span style="color:#000099">Lawl, thanks everyone. XD I feel better about posting this now, since if anyone steals this they're basically dead. x3

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<div align="center"><span style="font-size:12pt;line-height:100%">Chapter Two ~ The Actual Tutorial</span></div>

Hanako came out of the dressing room and looked at the shop keeper. “Wow, it really suits you!”Hanako blushed as she looked at the outfit she was wearing. A small, pink T-shirt with gray pants, and black and white shoes with baggy socks. “Does it really...? How do I get the money to buy more outfits?” She looked at some of the beautiful outfits while the shopkeeper explained. “You dance! Depending on what place you get, you can get around 90-300ish Den. The Den you earn is all stored on that card you received when you chose your nickname.” Hanako stared at her. “What!? Only 300 Den per dance!? The outfit I was looking at was 75,000 Den though...” “Once you get Novice rank, you can dance against Rhythm Masters with other people and earn 4,000 or more Den, even 100,000 sometimes, per round.” “100,000 Den!? Holy crap! See ya later, I’m going to get the Novice rank!”

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“What... the... HECK!?” Hanako stared at the basket ball court while trying to figure out what she just did. “The tutorial Tasha gave didn’t help at all!” She then heard laughter from someone and glared at the young man. “Haha... sorry, sorry, I shouldn’t have laughed.” “Well you just did... Might as well continue until you’re satisfied.” “Nah, as an apology, let me teach you a few tips, since from the looks of it, Tasha taught nothing, like usual. My name is Destati” Hanako stood there for a few seconds before finally accepting his offer. “...Fine, but as punishment for laughing at me, I get to call you Destato Potato. My name’s Hanako.” Destati stared at her. “Wait, what!? Destato Potato!? The hell!?” Hanako laughed then smiled. “Well then, let’s start!”

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“Okay,” Destati started. “Let’s start by actually explaining stuff.” Hanako nodded. “Let’s start with regular moves. You can do a better performance if you dance to the beat of the music. This is what we call “perfecting”. If you keep up the perfects, your score can increase a lot. This is what we call “chaining”. Understand so far?” “Yeah, but it’s really hard to perfect!” “That’s why you count the beats in the song. You start a move on every other fourth beat, so if you start a new move the exact moment you hear the fourth beat, you perfect.” Hanako nodded. “If you dance a little too early or late, you get a great. If you dance pretty early or late, you get a cool, and before or after that is a bad. If you try dancing too early or late, or forget the move that’s next, you miss, and suffer the penalty of not being able to do the next move.” Hanako nodded again. “That sounds pretty easy...” Destati shook his head. “It’s harder than it sounds. Plus, if you try a certain routine, you get more points for perfects and greats, but lose points when you get cools and bads. We call this “chancing”.” “So that’s it? Destati nodded. “Unless you want me to explain about intense moves.” “Yes, please.”

Destati stretched before starting. “Intense moves are basically cooler looking moves than regular moves. Depending on what kind of dance you’re doing, they could be worth more points if you do them.” “Okay... And what do you mean by different dances?” “This will be a pain in the ass to explain, so I’m only going to explain some of them. First you have Choreography, which is the easiest. It’s just following a routine. Dynamic-Regular is pretty much the same as Choreo, but you get one or two freestyles depending on how many people you’re dancing with. When it’s your turn to freestyle, you can do any move you want, even intense moves. Dynamic-Intense is the same as Dynamic-Regular, except all the moves will be intense, expect for the freestyle part. You can pretty much tell what dance is which from there.” Hanako sat on the ground while trying to understand everything that was just said. “I think I understand...” “Good! Do you need to know about anything else?” “Umm... What are licenses? I heard about them, but how, where, and when do I take them?”

“Licenses are what you take to get the next rank. You can take them whenever you think you’re ready. Oh, you also have to pay, and depending on what license rank you’re taking, it can cost a lot.” Destati stretched and continued. “Right now you’re the Stiffy rank. When you’re ready, go to the building you registered at to take the license. You’ll have to pay 600 Den per try since you’ll be going for the Novice rank.” Hanako nodded. “What do I have to do to pass them?” “You have to get a certain score, probably a x2 chain, and a certain amount of perfects. That’s it for today, it’s pretty late. Oh, before I forget, here.” Destati gave Hanako 10,000 Den and a piece of paper. “Use the Den to try and take your license, and the paper has my phone number on it so you can call me whenever you don’t understand something. “Thanks so much! “ Hanako smiled. “Wait... I thought Den was stored on the card?” “You can carry it around, too. I keep some incase I come across a noob.” Destati stuck his tongue out at Hanako. “Hey, wait a sec! You jerk!” She kept trying to punch Destati while he laughed. “You’re weak.” He said while laughing. “Anyway, good luck, and I hope to see you as a Novice rank tomorrow!” Destati left and Hanako went over everything to make sure she understood. “Alright.” She said. “I’ll get some sleep and practice for the license tomorrow!”

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<div align="center"><span style="font-size:12pt;line-height:100%">Chapter Two FAQ</span></div>

Q: What are Rhythm Masters?
A: NPCs.

Q: Who is Destati?
A: Destato Potato is my sister’s male character.

Q: ...Destato Potato?
A: Yes, Destato Potato.

Q: What are regular / intense moves?
A: Regular moves are 4key and Intense moves are 8key.

Q: Wtf!? That’s not how chance works!
A: So? It’s my story, I can say chance makes you eat chicken if I want to.

Q: Intense and Regular? Could you have come up with an even worse name?
A: Yes, I could have.

Q: Wtf!? That’s not how licenses work!
A: Once again, it’s my story. I can say licenses turn you into half-elves if I want to.

Q: Wtf!? You can’t gift den!
A: Do I need to explain again? It’s my story.

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I haven't even started on chapter 3 yet. xD At least when I have free time at school / when I'm not playing videogames I can write.</span>

Lol, I kept laughing at the faqs XD

Hanako%chan Wrote:<span style="color:#000099">Destato Potato</span>

HATE

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Lol Destato Potato XDD *bricked*

Anyways as before it's niiice :3..

LOL at the FAQ!! xDD

so far, im loving your story hanako! :3 CONTINUE AFTER YOUR DONE WITH YOUR SCHOOL WORK AND VIDEOGAMES!! D:

we want more!

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!! PLEASE DO MORE!! PLEASE <3 I LOVE IT!! ^^
great work....
omg when it goes to kau u gotta put me in the story lol jk jk u dont have to but if u do here's a character Firebert: A anoying/jerk of a friend but still a
friend ^^
ANYWAYS I LOVE THE STORY!!

Lol, I LOLLED too at the Faqs xD

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