07-25-2007, 02:54 PM
woot <3 VIP ftw :o btw, theres 3 semester's in my school for a year...altho summer is just an "extra" semester for students who start in January XD so ya...i technically get a semester off xP
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07-25-2007, 02:54 PM
07-25-2007, 03:29 PM
*pretends to know* sorry xD i'm british o.o' is a semester a term? and are you in school as in college or school as in...erm..high school? xD
07-25-2007, 03:35 PM
college XD and ya semester = around 4 months = a term lol
07-26-2007, 04:06 AM
oooh~~ when does hooni take his shirt off? roflmao :] ur story is rocking :] kept writing or i'll hunt you down..and do something..like give you a pie.. +_+
07-26-2007, 09:22 PM
dw more chapters to come, xD i didn't think i'd enjoy writing this but i have, Big thanks to Phoenix for editing it for me, <33
Matsuri ~ i hate pie xD
Matsuri ~ i hate pie xD
07-31-2007, 03:05 PM
Chapter four: “Pineapple Guy”
Hooni sat and watched the boy eat. He wondered if he would ever speak, and if he did, would he mention anything about his past that has made him so scared and silent…
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Suddenly, the front door slammed open and a tiny patter of feet came through the door. It was the Raven back from work. She looked around and couldn’t find Hooni in sight. “Daddy Hoooooooooni! Where are you?” she screamed at the top of her voice.
Hooni looked at the boy, who was still slobbering the cereal, “That’s Raven, she is about your age. Maybe you can talk to her?” the boy said nothing. Sighing, Hooni replied to Ravens call, “I’m in the kitchen Raven”
“Oooh!” Raven kicked her favorite stomping boots (the ones she used to kick RedSpin on numerous occasions) to the ground and ran straight into the kitchen, as she ran into the kitchen she stopped and froze as she gazed at the boy. “Be nice.” Warned Hooni. Ravens eyes turned red as she continued to stare at the boy. “Oh no” Hooni whimpered, he knew what Raven’s temper was like. Usually it was RedSpin on the receiving end. Raven clenched her fists and stomped her feet on the floor.
“HE IS EATING OUT OF MY FAVOURITE BOWL!” Hooni jumped back in confusion “Favorite bowl?”
“AND THAT’S MY FAVOURITE CEREAL HE IS EATING!” Hooni felt like banging his head on the nearest thing, Raven was just picking a fight now. She never mentioned anything about a bowl, and she didn’t even like cereal…
Raven pointed at the boy, who was still eating and hadn’t noticed her, “Now you die!” Hooni grabbed Raven by the ear “Didn’t I say be nice!?”
“B-but”
“No buts Raven!”
Raven’s eyes watered up as she did her innocent puppy dog face.
“That won’t work this time. This is important. OK?”
“Fine!” Raven crossed her arms and pouted; eventually she gave up trying and took a seat next to the boy.
“Does he have a name Daddy Hooni?
“Of course, everyone has a name silly, he just won’t tell us that’s all.”
Raven poked the boy in the arm; the boy jumped and looked back at Raven. He had cereal and milk all over his mouth. “Eww gross” Raven thought to herself.
“So what’s your name?” Raven asked.
“…”
“Don’t be a silly head! What’s your name?”
“…”
“You’re making me angry!!”
Hooni interrupted, “Calm down Raven, he is just nervous.”
“Humph”
Just then the front door opened again, this time it was the rest of the crew back from work. Most of them raced upstairs while RedSpin, Casanova and Jong Won made their way into the kitchen to see what all the talking was about.
RedSpin was the first to stride into the kitchen, “Raven what did we tell you about running ahead of us you could’ve got…WOAH what’s that!?” He jumped up and pointed to the boy, it was like RedSpin had never seen a boy before. “Is this Raven’s boyfriend?” taunted RedSpin. Raven turned to RedSpin, “Whoa missy!” RedSpin continued, “No wonder you wanted to get home so quickly! You little minx!”
Usually, Raven would’ve murdered RedSpin by now, but she was on her best behavior for Hooni.
“Shut up RedSpin” Hooni added, as he moved closer to Raven, and put his arm around her. Raven was burning up inside, there was only one thing in this world she hated more than anything, and that was RedSpin. Without warning she jumped out of her chair and punched RedSpin in the crotch, like a shot RedSpin fell to the floor “Mommy” he whimpered as tears rolled from his eyes. The boy giggled as Raven got back in her seat; this was the first time he had smiled since he appeared. Raven winked at him and he blushed.
“Aw” said Hooni, as he smiled at the boy.
“Now that’s entertainment!” Casanova said, as he appeared from the hallway with Jong Won. Instantly they both looked at the boy.
“Diego dropped him off here. We have to look after him for a while until we find out who he is, but according to Diego he has NPC dance quality in him.”
Casanova nodded, as he bent down next to the boy “He is so cute.” Casanova continued to inspect the boy, “Oooh and what a cute fashion style you have!” Hooni rolled his eyes.
“There’s nothing cute about him.” RedSpin spat, as he slowly got back on his feet. Rubbing his crotch, he stood awkwardly as he whimpered in pain.
The boy grabbed Casanova’s hand and smiled at him. “Aww I think he likes you” Hooni said giggling. “Well obviously, who doesn’t like a super cool, stylish, super hot guy like me?” Casanova flicked his hair back like he was in some sort of shampoo advert.
The boy looked up at Casanova “I don’t have a name” he said softly as he looked to the floor.
Hooni and Raven jumped up “Yay he spoke!” they both said, as they high-five each other.
“Hey!” Raven popped up, “Let’s give him a name!
“That sounds like a good idea” Hooni agreed, The boy nodded excitingly.
“Let’s call him Eric!” Casanova said “Simple yet very stylish!”
“No way” Hooni protested “If you name him he will turn out just like you, and I can’t cope with another egotistic maniac.”
Casanova pouted and began to look at himself in his pocket mirror that he carried with him everywhere he went.
“How about Dufus” RedSpin added.
“How about another punch in the balls?” Raven said waving her fists at RedSpin, who quivered in fear.
“He needs an interesting name, something that no one else would have, since he is a unique person.”
Jong Wong pointed at the boy’s hair. “Pineapple” he said, as then he turned and walked out of the room.
Everyone in the kitchen looked at each other in amazement, “That’s it!” Hooni said clapping “Pineapple Guy!”
“Cool!!” Raven shouted, as she hugged Hooni in happiness.
“Weird” said RedSpin, puzzled.
“So not stylish or hot” said Casanova, shaking his head in disbelief.
The boy smiled “I like it.”
Hooni walked over to the boy and picked him up.
“Welcome to the family Pineapple Guy”
Hooni sat and watched the boy eat. He wondered if he would ever speak, and if he did, would he mention anything about his past that has made him so scared and silent…
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Suddenly, the front door slammed open and a tiny patter of feet came through the door. It was the Raven back from work. She looked around and couldn’t find Hooni in sight. “Daddy Hoooooooooni! Where are you?” she screamed at the top of her voice.
Hooni looked at the boy, who was still slobbering the cereal, “That’s Raven, she is about your age. Maybe you can talk to her?” the boy said nothing. Sighing, Hooni replied to Ravens call, “I’m in the kitchen Raven”
“Oooh!” Raven kicked her favorite stomping boots (the ones she used to kick RedSpin on numerous occasions) to the ground and ran straight into the kitchen, as she ran into the kitchen she stopped and froze as she gazed at the boy. “Be nice.” Warned Hooni. Ravens eyes turned red as she continued to stare at the boy. “Oh no” Hooni whimpered, he knew what Raven’s temper was like. Usually it was RedSpin on the receiving end. Raven clenched her fists and stomped her feet on the floor.
“HE IS EATING OUT OF MY FAVOURITE BOWL!” Hooni jumped back in confusion “Favorite bowl?”
“AND THAT’S MY FAVOURITE CEREAL HE IS EATING!” Hooni felt like banging his head on the nearest thing, Raven was just picking a fight now. She never mentioned anything about a bowl, and she didn’t even like cereal…
Raven pointed at the boy, who was still eating and hadn’t noticed her, “Now you die!” Hooni grabbed Raven by the ear “Didn’t I say be nice!?”
“B-but”
“No buts Raven!”
Raven’s eyes watered up as she did her innocent puppy dog face.
“That won’t work this time. This is important. OK?”
“Fine!” Raven crossed her arms and pouted; eventually she gave up trying and took a seat next to the boy.
“Does he have a name Daddy Hooni?
“Of course, everyone has a name silly, he just won’t tell us that’s all.”
Raven poked the boy in the arm; the boy jumped and looked back at Raven. He had cereal and milk all over his mouth. “Eww gross” Raven thought to herself.
“So what’s your name?” Raven asked.
“…”
“Don’t be a silly head! What’s your name?”
“…”
“You’re making me angry!!”
Hooni interrupted, “Calm down Raven, he is just nervous.”
“Humph”
Just then the front door opened again, this time it was the rest of the crew back from work. Most of them raced upstairs while RedSpin, Casanova and Jong Won made their way into the kitchen to see what all the talking was about.
RedSpin was the first to stride into the kitchen, “Raven what did we tell you about running ahead of us you could’ve got…WOAH what’s that!?” He jumped up and pointed to the boy, it was like RedSpin had never seen a boy before. “Is this Raven’s boyfriend?” taunted RedSpin. Raven turned to RedSpin, “Whoa missy!” RedSpin continued, “No wonder you wanted to get home so quickly! You little minx!”
Usually, Raven would’ve murdered RedSpin by now, but she was on her best behavior for Hooni.
“Shut up RedSpin” Hooni added, as he moved closer to Raven, and put his arm around her. Raven was burning up inside, there was only one thing in this world she hated more than anything, and that was RedSpin. Without warning she jumped out of her chair and punched RedSpin in the crotch, like a shot RedSpin fell to the floor “Mommy” he whimpered as tears rolled from his eyes. The boy giggled as Raven got back in her seat; this was the first time he had smiled since he appeared. Raven winked at him and he blushed.
“Aw” said Hooni, as he smiled at the boy.
“Now that’s entertainment!” Casanova said, as he appeared from the hallway with Jong Won. Instantly they both looked at the boy.
“Diego dropped him off here. We have to look after him for a while until we find out who he is, but according to Diego he has NPC dance quality in him.”
Casanova nodded, as he bent down next to the boy “He is so cute.” Casanova continued to inspect the boy, “Oooh and what a cute fashion style you have!” Hooni rolled his eyes.
“There’s nothing cute about him.” RedSpin spat, as he slowly got back on his feet. Rubbing his crotch, he stood awkwardly as he whimpered in pain.
The boy grabbed Casanova’s hand and smiled at him. “Aww I think he likes you” Hooni said giggling. “Well obviously, who doesn’t like a super cool, stylish, super hot guy like me?” Casanova flicked his hair back like he was in some sort of shampoo advert.
The boy looked up at Casanova “I don’t have a name” he said softly as he looked to the floor.
Hooni and Raven jumped up “Yay he spoke!” they both said, as they high-five each other.
“Hey!” Raven popped up, “Let’s give him a name!
“That sounds like a good idea” Hooni agreed, The boy nodded excitingly.
“Let’s call him Eric!” Casanova said “Simple yet very stylish!”
“No way” Hooni protested “If you name him he will turn out just like you, and I can’t cope with another egotistic maniac.”
Casanova pouted and began to look at himself in his pocket mirror that he carried with him everywhere he went.
“How about Dufus” RedSpin added.
“How about another punch in the balls?” Raven said waving her fists at RedSpin, who quivered in fear.
“He needs an interesting name, something that no one else would have, since he is a unique person.”
Jong Wong pointed at the boy’s hair. “Pineapple” he said, as then he turned and walked out of the room.
Everyone in the kitchen looked at each other in amazement, “That’s it!” Hooni said clapping “Pineapple Guy!”
“Cool!!” Raven shouted, as she hugged Hooni in happiness.
“Weird” said RedSpin, puzzled.
“So not stylish or hot” said Casanova, shaking his head in disbelief.
The boy smiled “I like it.”
Hooni walked over to the boy and picked him up.
“Welcome to the family Pineapple Guy”
08-01-2007, 03:14 AM
pineapple guy!!! you don't like pie??... I'm sorry T^T I didn't knowwww!!~ how 'bou a krabby patty? 
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