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Okay so~ I decided to write a story around the time that Rai started, but he's a faster worker then I am Tongue Anyway, it's more like a book.. Kinda. There are some gAU / sAU characters in it, but I'm too lazy to tell you who they are. I'll just list the people that are in it, to make it easier for you. Figure them out by their names as we go along xP

Edit = No more characters <3 Full list.

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  • PhoenixIce // Ice (Obvious much?)</li>
  • Llumina // Mina</li>
  • Raian // Ian </li>
  • Zabi // Izzy</li>
  • Elion // Lio</li>
  • Rorec // Xei </li>
  • LilSaint // Lao Lao (HAHAHA xP)</li>
  • Kumal // Lum (Rofl Lum > >)</li>
  • Kowiz</li>
  • Tae_Suhk // Tae</li>
  • Scotty/Spydah // Spy</li>
  • BlazenJ // Jax</li>
  • Tasaku // Kaz</li>
  • J3nzy // Jen</li>
  • Regun</li>
  • Chenny</li>
  • Ethanwolf // Nathan</li>
  • Esperanza</li>
  • LingXiaoyu // Ling</li>
  • Suika</li>
  • KamiKaner // Amix - Kae</li>
  • Laharorn // Suou - Harem (LIKE HARLEM? :o)</li>
  • nfinite // Fyn - Jie</li>
  • Afronover // Fredrick</li>
  • Auramei </li>
  • Gamingnerd</li>
  • Hotshot</li>
  • Aevitas // Tifa</li>
  • Raindeavour</li>
  • Sazuki</li>
  • doll</li>
  • m33ky // Miwa</li>
  • Hemmie // HJ</li>
Long list, yes I know. May get longer? Possibly. Too short? Well, lay off I did this list at 2AM. Anyway~ That's all of them ^^ If I spelled your name wrong just tell me ;; *BAD SPELLER* After a while, if my story goes along well, then I'll slowly start revealing them one by one. Check the list often XP I may get bored eventually.


Okay~ On to business. It's novel-style writing, so there won't be a lot of " * * " action, and things like that. However ~ When the character is looking on a broadcast, reading a book, or something like that then I'll change the style to a more Roleplaying-type writing.

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There's a beautiful town named Audition. Every kid dreams of growing up in that town, everyone dreads of being too old and having to leave that town. Because of the vigorous training and dancing, the age limit has been set to only 14-45yr olds in the town.. safety reasons. Anyway, that town is always bustling with young'uns running around and shopping at the mall, grooving by the Music Store to listen to music.. or even stopping by the Cafe. While they're not hanging out with friends, they're dancing off in the studio to raise their ranking in the World Wide ranking to be Number One.
Behind the scenes, there's a company called the AX-Corp that takes care of everything withing Audition. From the dance battle scenery to the moves themselves, they can be called the "Dancing Gods". In order to be permitted into the AX-Corp, one must first meet a few qualifications.<ol type='1'>[*]Must be 17 or older to apply.</li>[*]Only allowed to try out with the recommendation from the president or Vice President themselves.</li>[*]Must have a full education in order to attend.</li></ol> After meeting these, you're allowed to try out. With no paperwork or anything, you'll be sent to the headquarters building that will be located just on the edge of town. Seemingly living there until they're 45, you're in that job until you either quit, or you're forced out.
Everything seems fine and dandy, until one incident long ago.. Where a few boys were caught doing something horrible, the first time in it's 50 year span, for a seeming crime of trying to hack into the database in the AX-Corp. Because of this, 3 of them were banned, a few went missing, and even one or two were taken into custody to serve under the AX-Corp with no pay for life. The 3 banned boys had quite different plans of their own.. and are currently residing in unknown territory plotting God knows what.

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So, yeah~ That's it :ph34r: Any questions? No. Okay. Thanks <3 I'll start it soon. Wink
lol "young'uns" XD sounds like an old person talkin xD
<3 the story =)
gogogo write moreeee =) <3~
oohhh sounds cool, i cant wait to read more XD

Anonymous

Aw, that's so cute, Rumi! I'll be supporting you all the way, good luck on your own story~~ ^o^~~
I already know who I'll be :ph34r:. Thanks for telling me beforehand Big Grin
Can't wait till the story's out, sounds interesting =p
Ha ha ha.. Yeah I have a habit of revealing things beforehand (T T;; *Zips mouth* No moree. Grwar. Anyway, this might be long, or short.. dunno. Here you go anyway <3. Changed it a little bit, for the beginning anyway. The rest is going to be more novel like~ The intro's are going to be almost like a play.

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Location: Audition City.
Time: 5:57AM.

<< 5:57 >>

[[ Screen opens up to reveal an apartment room with a closet in the corner, a desk with a computer, a small nightstand with an alarmclock in it, and a bed with a boy sleeping atop. Clothes scattered around the room, and the blanket was half on the floor, only partially covering his legs. ]]

<< 5:58 >>

The boy was lightly snoring, tossing and turning around the bed, his face completely emotionless so it was unclear whether or not he was having a good dream or a nightmare. The sound of cars running down and some people's voices could be heard coming from the open window nearby the boy's bed. The rushing in wind caused his wild blue hair to rustle around, brushing his bare shoulders.

<< 5:59 >>

He turned once more so his face was now implanted into the pillow, making everyone wonder whether or not he could breathe. The wind picked up, chilling him slightly with the warm summer heat as it wandered around the room before going back out. The sudden sensation disturbed his peacefully angelic face, making him turn around in a 180, his face now completely facing upwards.

<< 6:00 >>

(( Beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep ))

His breathing suddenly cut short as his lips pulled down into a snarl, his eyebrows arched. He shot up from bed and lazily opened his eyes, yet they were in a daze.. as if he were still dreaming. His finger shot towards the alarm clock, pointing at it accusingly.

"For the last fucking time! I don't want 'butter on my buns' what the hell is your fucking problem?! Go upskirt some schoolgirls for all I care! God!" He leaned forward and slapped the alarm clock, sending it spiralling out the window and down into someone's unsuspecting car. The alarm went off and there was a lot of angry and surprised yelling, even someone crying at the sudden shock. Ignoring the commotion, the boy slipped back into his sleep and planted his face back into the pillow as if this never happened.

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<< 10:47 >>

The door to the apartment creaked open slightly as a girl with long golden-brown hair peeked through, frowning slightly as she noticed the darkness of the room. Slipping through, she closed the door behind her and wandered around, stopping infront of a partially opened door. Smirking a little, her teal colored eyes sparked as she slowly opened it and peered inside, her smile widening as she spotted the boy sleeping ontop of the bed. Quietly, she ran over and jumped ontop of him, grinning down at his startled expression as she sat down on his stomach.

"Waaaake up~ Sleepyhead. Do you know what time it is? You told me that we would go together, yet you're still here sleeping! You were supposed to be ready by now! Seriously, Ice, you're so irresponsible. If we don't hurrry.. we're going to be late for the interview..." She frowned, noticing he went back to sleep and ignored her. Poking both his cheeks with the tip of her index fingers, she waited until the unusual pressure would wake him up, since yelling in his ear apparently did nothing. It worked. His eyes slowly opened, revealing their deep aqua hue, similar to his own hair color. He blinked a few times, uncomprehending what was happening for a moment. Then, as his mind slowly began to function, he yawned, sitting up a little and causing her to topple down into his lap.

"You know.. it's rude to sit on someone when they're sleeping, Mina."
"But.. you wouldn't wake up either way. Why is it so hard to wake you up anyway? And what the hell happened to your alarm clock that Lum made you before he graduated last summer?"

He yawned again, unwilling to argue with her at the moment and looked over at the nightstand, noticing for the first time that it was indeed missing. Shrugging, he gently slid her off of him and stood up, taking a towel and his tooth brush as he headed over to the door, looking back at her lazily.

"How the hell am I supposed to know? It was there last night before I went to bed. Maybe some bird came in and ate it. Anyway.. I gotta go shower to wash off the germs I got from you. See ya and uh.. make yourself at home, like you always do. Just don't raid my fridge, alright?" He grinned and ducked behind the door just in time to dodge a pillow flying towards his face at what seemed like 160 mph. Laughing, Ice headed into the bathroom door and continued on his his human necessities.

Meanwhile, Mina was fuming at his lack of compassion and rude nature. "What a jerk.. germs? Honestly.. he's more likely to get germs, not me. And what the hell does he mean, a bird ate his alarm clock? Does he think I'm stupid? Ugh!" Done yelling at air, she cleaned up his room out of habit to vent out her frusterations, and headed out the door towards the small kitchen the apartment had to offer. Popping in some bread into the toaster, she made some breakfast and slumped down into the couch, flipping on the TV while she waited.

[[ Saturday Morning News with Jen and Nathan. ]]
<< News Music: On. >>

Jen: "Siiiiiigh ~ Summer time is here! No more school, that's for sure. Feel that warm, summer breeze.. and those awesome summer cherry blossoms! Now's definately the best time of the year. Yes siree, summer really is the best time of--"

Nathan: "Will you shut up? Summer sucks ass. It's too damn hot, there's fat ladies in BIKINIS, thinking they look hot, and oh dear god.. Little kids are running around EVERYWHERE! What the hell is so great about summer!?"

Jen: "W-Well.. um.. oh! There's no school, for one!"

Nathan: "Yes, well. School is a great way to keep annoying brats inside and out of our hair. Plus, what the hell is everyone going to do all day? Atleast homework gives you something to do."

Jen: "Uhmm.. There's.. romance? With all the free time, it gives you more time to be with your lover!"

Nathan: "... What if you don't have a lover, Jen? What then? Summer would be a GREAT time to remember that very depressing fact! Look at all the free time you have to be emo. Yes, folks, just go into that bathroom already and cut away. Cut away all your problems! Razors really work wonders, you know."

Jen: "No one needs to know your secret habits, Nathan." *Hisses the words, glaring at him, then looking back at the camera with an abnormally cheerful smile* "There's also the beach, though! What a great way to be with --"

Nathan: "Sex on the beach?"

Jen: "Pardon?"

Nathan: "I said.. Sex. On. The. Beach. Is that what you're saying?"

Jen: "H-Heavens no! That's not what I'm saying!"

Nathan: "... Riiiiiiiight. And Angelina Jolee has a p--"

Jen: "MOVING ON. What about that super special awesome sexy tournament coming up! Yes, famous world star Ian would be going up against the android Lao Lao once more, the two undefeated champions of the--"

Nathan: "Never say that ever again. Besides.. WHO. CARES. They win EVERY freaking time. Why don't we just say 'they won', give them a trophy, and get it over with!? Plus, I don't know about you but I do not like sitting in a really hot room, crowded with people screaming in your ear, and all you see is two hot guys dancing. Is that really that exciting?"

Jen and a whole bunch of the female workers, even some guys: "YES!"

Nathan: "... You're all a bunch of bastards, you know that?"

Jen: "Yes, well.. That's all the time we have for today. How about we move on to the sports section?"

Nathan: "... I hate spo--"

Jen: "Sports! Hit it!"

[[ Click. // Screen blank. ]]

Mina looked up, frowning as she glared at Ice, who had a piece of toast in his mouth. He was sitting next to her in the couch, the remote in his hand and his expression bored.

"Hey! I was looking at that.."
"Whatever. We're going to be late, let's go."
"... Jerk."
"Ditz." He stood up before she could answer, and headed towards the door, slipping on his shoes and grabbing his watch. He looked back over to see Mina already behind him, her arms crossed and ready to go. "Come on, it's already 11:30.. we were supposed to be there by 12. Don't want to upset President Lio.."

They walked down the street, Ice leading and Mina behind, yet close by. It wasn't really that far to the AX-Corp from Ice's home, yet it would still take atleast 15 minutes. Upon walking, they never talked or looked at each other, except for when Mina would ask for the time. When they reached a corner, some guy suddenly appeared at the other end, colliding with Ice. The two fell over on their bottoms, yet neither were carrying anything so nothing was spilled.

"Ah.. Ice! Are you okay? And you too, sir...?"
"Oh.. Uh.. Sorry. Wasn't really paying attention.. are you okay? I'm fine.."

Ice rubbed his back and merely glanced up at the guy with a blank expression, slowly nodding in response and taking Mina's hand, standing up. He helped the other man up as well, realizing they were about the same age, yet he seemed more.. professional His hair was jet black and spiked, his eyes a honey-butterscotch color. He seemed quite handsome, but it wasn't really his place to decide. Instead, he moved his hand over towards the top of his own head, running his fingers through the tousled blue hair that would never seem finely combed.

"Don't worry about it.. I should have watched where I was going."
"Ah.. Hey, sir. Aren't you.. Izzy Koishikawa from the AX-Corp?"

Ice suddenly snapped to attention at the mention of the name, looking over the man once more before he suddenly realized it himself, silently cursing that he didn't realize it earlier. Though, he did silently thank Mina for pointing it out, seeing this as an opportunity to find out more about the job.

"Yes, I am, actually. The Vice President. Nice to meet you.. ah.. you two.. aren't you those kids that I met before? Ah.. I remember now. Ice and Mina.. yes, you're going to the interview, are you not? I mean.. you were headed in that direction."
"We are. Mina and I were just a bit late.. hopefully it wouldn't give us some sort of a penalty."
"Not at all ~ Come with me. That way, even if you are late, they won't give it a second thought. You would be with the VP, after all." Izzy grinned at that, feeling some sort of self-pride. With no further discussion, he lead the way down the street towards the edge of town, where the building was to be found.

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Reaching the edge of the pavement, Mina and Ice both looked up in shock at the huge buidling, realizing it could hold and board the entire town itself. A huge sign at the entrance way read 'AX-Corp', but that wasn't even the oddest part. Ice slowly turned towards Izzy, who was also marveling at his prized building, as if it was his first time seeing it.

"So um.. Izzy. Why aren't there any windows? Do you want us to suffocate?"

Izzy turned towards Ice and gave him a 'Are-you-mentally-challenged?' type of look, and sighed, looking back at the building. "There are no windows because the machinery works better in the dark. Don't worry about the air supply, I assure you we have enough. I'm still alive, and I spend most of my hours in there. And no, we don't wear oxygen tanks or anything.. I promise you. Anyway, if you're done gawking.. we should get going. I can hear the welcoming ceremony has already begun. Let's hurry, shall we?"

He ran down towards the door, stopping and waiting for the two others who merely glanced at each other before running down as well. As soon as Izzy placed his hands on the doorway, they all knew that life would change drastically, if not completely..

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Location: Unknown.
Time: Infinite.

A man with long blonde hair moved around a dark room, his crimson eyes never leaving the screen, even when his back was to it. A door in the farther corner opened while two men stepped inside. One was rather tall with wild blue hair and deep blue eyes, while the other was just a little bit shorter with neatly combed purple hair.

"Sir Amix, the prototypes have all been completed. They work well, too."

The blonde haired man stopped working for a moment and finally turned his attention away from the screen towards the purple-haired boy, slowly nodding.

"Well done, Suou. You and Fyn need to keep observing the other guys.. they're completely unloyal. No telling when they might resort to sabotage. I will continue designing the ODB to further move our plans. Dismissed."

The two merely bowed once, then walked away. The blue-haired one strayed behind slightly, however, to glance at the design plan that was already made once Amix had already turned around. Frowning a little, he looked at the ground for a minute before continuing on and catching up to the other.

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Oooh :o It came out longer then I planned, but anyway.. there you go. Introduced 6 gAU people, so have fun figuring them out. (Some are obvious). Don't reveal any names D: It's no fun. I already know I told a lot of people, who is who, though. Enjoy ~ The next one will either come out tomorrow or next Friday. Depending on my imagination and attention span Tongue
Interesting O_O;
I'm 100% sure who three out of the six introduced players are =p
The rest, lemme guess. Amix blonde and evil lala~. Suou purple haired and Fyn blue haired xD...
I think I know lol

nice 1st chapter (:
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LOLZ dhan! she told us that yesterday xD

yay alii, write more~ loved it and even laughed at teh tv ppl Tongue


hmhm i can see 4 out of 6 gau pplz @_@ gimme teh rest! XD
mwahahah. I know who all is >D Ali told me raaawr.
I guessed them all right except one though =P

CAN I EXPOSE THEM? D:
Lawl <3 the chapter =) i can c 5/6...still gota figure out one xP
Very nice Llumina, I was excited to see my name on the list Big Grin! Keep it up looking forward to read more!

PS: WHY AM I LAST ON Z LIST!!! At least you could have made GN LAST! why meeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
LilSaint Wrote:mwahahah. I know who all is >D Ali told me raaawr.
I guessed them all right except one though =P

CAN I EXPOSE THEM? D:

lolz she asked us not to do it! rawr!

hmhm i can see an awesome gau player on teh first chapter Tongue
Lol hotshot XD Sorry. You're last, but loved <3 So don't worry :o

And NO DON'T EXPOSE THEM o.x Just wait until most of the people get introduced, THEN you can XP

And yeah <3 Thanks for the comments ^^ Next chapter coming up. Oh and also, I mixed up something XD There's actually
  • Mina </li>
  • Ice</li>
  • Amix </li>
  • Lio </li>
  • Lao Lao </li>
  • Lum </li>
  • Fyn</li>
  • Suou </li>
  • Jen</li>
  • Nathan </li>
  • Izzy </li>
  • Ian</li>
All are gAU XD *CANT COUNT* I'll be surprised if you get it, honestly.
Jen = J3nzy LOL

xD?
LilSaint Wrote:Jen = J3nzy LOL

xD?

LOL you fail XD Was it that easy? But yeah~ Jen = J3nzy.

Guess the rest :o I dare you.

But don't shout it out, kthx.

<3.

P.S. - OMG D: I forgot Aev and Rain. *SHOT* I knew I was missing some people :ph34r:
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