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  • alwizhyperalwizhyper
    July 2007
    great chapter again rai!
    it took me a while to get around the forums again!
    i love the commercials as usual!
    the story is AWESOME! post more!! <333
  • RaianRaian
    February 2007
    <!--sizeo:3--><span style="font-size:12pt;line-height:100%"><!--/sizeo-->.hack//AU STATUS: IN PROGRESS
    1st EPISODE COMPLETED - THE BEGINNING - on Page 1
    2nd EPISODE COMPLETED - INHUMAN - on Page 2
    3rd EPISODE COMPLETED - DIS-REMEMBRANCE - on Page 3
    4th EPISODE COMPLETED - DUALITY - on Page 5
    5th EPISODE COMPLETED - IDENTITY - on Page 7 (finally!)
    6th EPISODE (half)COMPLETED - NEXUS - on Page 8 (lol?)
    <!--sizec--></span><!--/sizec-->
    <!--sizeo:2--><span style="font-size:10pt;line-height:100%"><!--/sizeo-->Character List<!--sizec--></span><!--/sizec-->

    Damien/Daedalus (Dae) - Main character, known to break into random periods of madness where he becomes a hacked character with immeasurable power. Currently under watch by the game's GMs. (Original Character)

    Jasmine - Damien's IRL best friend (Original Character, way more important than you think)

    MurasakiHana (Hana) - Damien's friend in-game, a female macabre dancer who enjoys art and flower (based on an audi-player)

    RGM*Chance (Chance) - One of the in-game mods who plays tough but is actually more light-hearted then he seems, works with RGM*Beat (based on an audi-player)

    RGM*Beat (Beat) - One of the more friendly in-game mods who is fair but still keeps justice in The Rhealm, works with RGM*Chance (based on an audi-player)

    Minari (Mina-chan) - The hyperactive founder of AraSuki, the fanclub of the famous Rhealm duo Arashi (based on an audi-player)

    Hayato - One of the Rhealm players, lost to Arashi in a competition (he has some importance...you just don't know what it is yet, haha) (based on an audi-player)

    Hybrid - The vice president of AraSuki, a almost non-clothed well-known womanizer and charmer (based on an audi-player)

    Ajisuki (Aji) - The sword-user of Arashi, known for his blazing in-game speed and natural charisma (based on an audi-player)

    Shinato (Shin) - The magician of Arashi, known for his great ability to adapt to many situations in-game and his general friendly attitude (based on an audi-player)

    Mysterious woman? - A woman who saved Dae from being deleted due to his hacking

    <a href="http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y75/Taiyo-san/dothackAU-HackedSong.png" target="_blank">Photoshopped battle pic, lol</a>

    <!--sizeo:5--><span style="font-size:18pt;line-height:100%"><!--/sizeo--><!--fonto:Impact--><span style="font-family:Impact"><!--/fonto-->.hack//AU - .hack//AUDI<!--fontc--></span><!--/fontc--><!--sizec--></span><!--/sizec-->
    - A crossover fanfiction in an alternate universe where Altimit/CCCorp have joined with Bugs/Nexon to create the first MMORPRG - Massive Multiplayer Online Role-Playing Rhythm Game, titled The Rhealm (PLEASE notice it's a combination of Rhythm and Realm...I didn't misspell realm =.=; )

    I'm going to be doing this in ANIME form (ha, dream come true) which means instead of chapters I'll be calling them Episodes, and I have OPs and EDs ready for you xD

    I cut songs (I like of course) I thought would fit the anime~

    [change xx to tt, obviously...]
    1st OP
    Miz - Yesterday
    hxxp://www.megaupload.com/?d=S86YLB5A

    1st ED
    Angela Aki - Jiyuu no Ashiato [Footprints of Freedom]
    hxxp://www.megaupload.com/?d=H3IYIO91

    2nd OP
    TERRA - ULTIMATE
    hxxp://www.megaupload.com/?d=AOJ7LUK0

    2nd ED
    UVERworld - Live everyday as if it were the last day
    hxxp://www.megaupload.com/?d=F3WXOS11

    Special 6th Episode OP
    Nami Tamaki - Double Story
    hxxp://rapidshare.com/files/44617680/Na ... _.mp3.html

    Special 6th Episode ED
    Sota Fujimori feat. Cyborg Akemi - Rise'n Beauty
    (yeah another IIDX song, I was lazy, okay? > >)
    hxxp://rapidshare.com/files/44619340/So ... y.mp3.html

    SukiSukiAraAra Theme Song (Instrumental)
    LUV UNLIMITED - Candy*
    hxxp://www.megaupload.com/?d=SN8YZQ8K

    Episode 5 Insert Song
    Riyu Kosaka - Yamato Nadeshiko ~MAXXX400STYLE~ENG edit~
    hxxp://www.megaupload.com/?d=956BR8M1

    I WOULD do what Gar did and ask people who wants to be in it...but IMO he put way too many people and only like 5 of them had an actual appearance or something...Plus I don't like keeping track of 31409832904 people.

    So. Priority goes in order of my bestest bestest buddies and secondly in order of how long I've known you (Sorry but I'm most likely not putting you if I don't KNOW you or only played with you once or w/e.)

    Ok before I provide character descriptions, I should explain how the game works...otherwise it'll...just be weird, lol.

    So here goes.

    Battles happen like this: When a player comes into contact with a monster or visible sight of a monster, a Dance Battle (DB) commences. Battles last between a minute to two minutes if the battle is with a normal monster and last three to five minutes if a boss (in some noted rare cases, battles have been known to last up to ten minutes). The battle is fairly fast-paced in that it makes use of a new type of innovative battle mode called Active Dance Mode (ADM). ADMs depends on the class of the player. Usually, the monster attacks and to dodge you must successfully hit the arrow combination. Using chance will result in either a complete block or counter, and missing an arrow will result in a hit. The same is true for an attack: missing an arrow will result in a missed attack, and chance will cause extra damage. The song usually depends on the weapon, and in The Rhealm, there are many kinds of songs, not just dramatic battle music or techno, resulting in an exponential increase in the number of kinds of weapons from .hack's The World.

    (Yes...I'm using GU classes cause they're just THAT much cooler...look on wikipedia if you wanna know what they actually are like, lol~)

    Twin Blade
    Weapon: Daggers
    Song: Usually fast-paced, BPM >120
    Many short, quick bursts of choreo.

    Edge Punisher
    Weapon: Large broadswords
    Song: Usually slow, perf chains cause increased damage, BPM 80-140
    Short combinations of 8k arrows with emphasis on perf chains.

    Lord Partizan
    Weapon: Spears
    Song: Varies, usually on the slightly faster side, BPM 100-200
    Bboy-esque, with player's attack shown one turn before and inputted one turn after
    Example:
    Before battle starts - Player's attack combo shown
    Right after battle starts - Player must input attack combo
    During player's attack combination - Player's defense combo shown
    During monster's attack combination - Player must input defense combo
    etc, etc.

    Blade Brandier
    Weapon: Swords
    Song: Varies intensely, can be just about any BPM
    Can be either choreo, ex choreo, or 8k, depending on the blade.

    Macabre Dancer
    Weapon: Sharp fans used in dancing motions
    Song: Varies, usually mid-tempo, BPM 80-180
    Freestyle-type ADM.

    Flick Reaper
    Weapon: Scythes or large axes
    Song: Songs with both an (Easy) and (Hard) setting; therefore, songs that can either have very slow BPMs or very fast BPMs
    Ex choreo or 8k, switching BPMs randomly in the song. When song is (Hard), rapidfire short bursts are displayed. When song is (Easy), long complex combinations are displayed.

    Tribal Grappler
    Weapon: Fists, feet, claws
    Song: Varies, strongest weapons actually have lowest BPMs. but are forced chance weapons.
    A very very very very....incredibly long arrow combination is showed that can fill up to the entire screen. Each correctly hit arrow results in a minimal damage hit and each miss is a miss. The strongest weapons will have mostly red arrows instead of blue arrows, though the BPM will be slower than weaker weapons, allowing for more time and more arrows to be pressed.

    Harvest Cleric
    Weapon: Defensive/Healing magic
    Song: Usually intensely slow songs, BPM 60-120.
    A long stream of arrows is displayed, and each arrow must be hit correctly for the spell to take effect; if a single arrow is missed, the spell fails. Higher-power spells include longer streams of arrows, and depending on the weapon and spell, can be either choreo, ex choreo, 8k, all with or without chance.

    Shadow Warlock
    Weapon: Offensive magic
    [Everything about this class is the same as harvest cleric, except spells are offensive instead of defensive]

    Steam Gunner
    Weapon: Guns/ Bayonets
    Song: Usually fast, BPM 100-200
    A reaction time-based ADM, with one to two arrows displayed per set, sets occuring nonstop one after the other. For each successful set, a shot is fired. BPM depends on the weapon while mode (choreo, ex choreo, 8k, with or without chance) depends on the bullets used. When a bayonet is used, gun-type ADMs are alternated between twin-blade type ADMs (slightly more arrows slightly less often).

    Adept Rogue
    Weapon: Can use any weapon after a Job Extend Quest is completed, though starts out with daggers.
    Song: Can be any song, since can use pretty much any weapon
    The ADM obviously depends on the weapon, but is usually more difficult than normal ADMs because other kinds of ADMs will appear randomly during the song. (For example, if using daggers, most of the time a dagger ADM will appear but sometimes a different one will appear; the battle animation will change according to the ADM.)

    ~~

    SO~!

    DOUZO~!
  • AevitasAevitas
    February 2007
    *does what Rai says*

    Sounds interesting already. I'd play a game like that lol.. can't wait to read it~~ x3

    *goes to study while waiting*
  • PhoenixIcePhoenixIce
    February 2007
    oo this is a nice twist~, im sure this'll be quite interesting =) go rai!! (i better be in this XP lol jks jks) ^^
    i wonder, how are teh ppl gonna be chosen? by their abilities(meaning how fast they can play, chance, or watever)? or just random? XD

    wats with the hxxp???

    btw, i like ur "manga" style of introductions lol and omfg i would <3 to play this game...if onli it existed :( ...hmm maybe ill make this game someday XD
  • shubygirlshubygirl
    February 2007
    ooohh sounds interesting XD i cant wait to read it~ XP
  • SoraNaeginoSoraNaegino
    February 2007
    sounds cool....better wait and read it
  • ZabiZabi
    February 2007
    Sounds real interesting, I'll definitely try to make time to read it =D
  • RaianRaian
    February 2007
    Hmhmhm...I'm getting way less done than I hoped~ xD

    Meh.. Sorry guys I've been real busy like whoa.

    If you cross your fingers I might get the first chapter done tomorrow...~ [I have mock trial from 4-10....and you're only actually doing something for an hour or two. The other hours you're WATCHING other people do stuff...so boring...] I'll have lots and lots of time to work on it, prolly enough to finish the first chapter.

    Actually I finished a bit of the prologue..but it turned out really bad, not the way I wanted it at ALL, so I'm gonna redo the whole thing. xD~

    I keep getting distracted and working on the character list~ [BAD ME I KNOW...~!] I already know some people I'm going to incorporate into it, if I know you're in it I prolly talked to you already, ahehe...you don't know how I'm gonna use your character though. -evil laugh-~

    Well anyway, expect the first episode by Friday, most likely late late late tomorrow or the day after. (Cause..you know, since I won't get home till 10 PM, it'll take a while to type up and after I post it up it'll be like 2 AM for you east-coasters...~)

    Rai out~
  • JanegrsJanegrs
    February 2007
    oh wow~ so long. lol. i'll read it over the weekend. x_O;;
  • RaianRaian
    February 2007
    [Lol sorry it took so long guys, I've been real busy (and I still will be but I'll try to find more time for the story heh.

    I'll try to make it so I get one 'episode' done per week so that way it's really like an anime with a new episode per week.
    And if that works out you'll be able to read it Friday Night/Saturday Mornings, whooooo...~

    HERE WE GO~! ^___^]

    [/Play 1st Season OP: Miz - Yesterday]
    [Insert Credits Here]
    [/Play]
    .H A C K// A U
    E P I S O D E 1 : T H E B E G I N N I N G

    Today Mr. Yuzohiro Takashi, head of CC Corp, announced The Rhealm’s one year anniversary with a celebration on unparalleled magnitude. Right from the get go several hours of fireworks lit up the night sky until the sun rose at 6 AM this morning. A special event is taking place today until 11:59 PM, pushing simultaneous Internet usage (as well as Internet traffic) to an all-time high! Everywhere you go people are wearing CC Corp’s most updated line of virtual reality headsets, nicknamed VREyes or VRIs, which are connected to a surprisingly reliable Altimit Internet connection. Mr. Takashi has rented hundreds of one-day servers, enough for every Rhealm player (or FRheaks, as some call them), to log on at once and experience lag-free gameplay, and then some! …Oh god, Zachary I’m not saying that…do I have to say that…? …BUT I HATE THE RHEALM!…Fired!?!? No! I NEED THIS JOB! FINE I’LL DO IT. TheworldisquicklybecomingtheRealRhealmandviewersare..ugh..
    encouragedtotrythisawesomegamethisisAmiraLopezreporting
    OHGODIHAVETOPUKE.

    Even though he didn't see it captured on TV, Damien heard the sound of gagging and laughed so hard he fell to the floor, kicking his feet. Remote in hand, he clicked off the TV and tried to catch a breath. “Man…I sure hate her but that was fucking hilarious.” He sprawled himself comfortably on his friend’s living room couch, taking a quick glance over at the homework he should’ve been doing.
    “Hey Damien, you want a soda while I’m in here-” A slightly older girl closed the fridge door, holding a coke. She looked over at her friend who was now half-asleep. “DAMIEN, how many times have I told you to take off your shoes if you’re going to lie down on that couch? …You know what, on second thought, save my nose the aggravation. Hurry and nap, I’m supposed to PLVL your character today so you can play with me and Daniel and them. …Heh, you two are so into each other.”
    Damien threw a pillow at her in response. “…Ew, Jasmine. Say that again and I might pull an Amira Lopez right on your Persian rug. The day I go gay for that asswad is the day you go out with Andrew…”
    Jasmine scoffed. “Ha! Just for that, maybe I will. Andrew’s a nice guy, you know, and so is Daniel. You’re just jealous because they’re more POPULAR than you…and get BETTER GRADES…and are on like 20 sports teams…and are GOOD-LOOKING.”
    “You saying I’m ugly?”
    “I’m not saying that. I’m just saying that they’re extremely attractive and you’re well…not as attractive. “
    “Oh, wow, that hurts. If you’re gonna be like that maybe I”ll just get someone ELSE to PLVL me. Someone nicer…with…with…a comftier couch!”
    “Good luck. It’s getting late, and I gotta start on an essay anyway.” She rushed over to the couch and put his books into his bag, zipping it up and handing it to him. “Well? You don’t need ANOTHER F, I assume.”
    “Psh, thanks for nothing.”
    “You’re welcome.” Jasmine smiled and practically pushed him out the door, closing it behind him.
    “…Geez, good night to you too…” Damien muttered to the door before turning around and walking to his own house next door. He went around to the back door, remembering he left the door unlocked since he wasn’t gone that long.
    “Mom? Dad?” He called into the empty house, surprised they weren’t home yet. “Eh, they’re probably eating out at some fancy place…as usual…” Sighing, he ran upstairs into his room, dropping his backpack onto the floor. He looked at the clock through the corner of his eye. “9 PM…it’s still early…kinda. I can get started on that homework anytime.” He reached into the deep darkness of his closet, beneath some clean? clothes, groping for his VRI. Not finding it anywhere, he frantically searched his room. Finally, he found it half-hidden in a closed dresser drawer. “Ugh, I hate it when mom rearranges things like this. Can’t ever FIND anything.” Placing it squarely on his head, he logged into The Rhealm.

    ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    Damien was stunned to find his character in a very dim, bleak-looking root town. Or at least, he thought it was a root town. He saw buildings. No players, no NPCs, but no monsters either, which was a sort of relief, at least. The area reminded him of a graveyard, with a dark gray sky filled with ominous-looking clouds. Everything looked ancient, as if it hadn’t been used in centuries; even the air felt unused. The only thing that was odd was that instead of cracks and cobwebs, there were random errors in all the scenery. Binary code and all sorts of letters and symbols filled up the broken parts of what looked like an NPC shopping area. It made him conjure up an image of what a computer would look like after a particularly horrendous virus attack. Damien tried to look at the field/root town information, but all of the information had been blacked out. Finally hitting him was the realization that his character looked completely different. He had originally been a Twin Blade, and, well, he still had two blades…but now they were two abnormally large blades curved at odd angles. They were constantly changing colors, but seemed to switch between shades of crimson, violet, and black the most. And they were glowing. Half terrified and half ecstatic, he looked up his character information.

    [CHARACTER DATA
    Name: Daedalus
    Level: XXXX
    Class: Data Fusionist]

    His swords were called “G0* KI11E<%”, and all of his stats were shown as “XXXX.”
    “Fuck. FUCK FUCK FUCK. Who the fuck messed with my character!? What the fuck’s a Data Fusionist!?!? AND HOW THE FUCK DO YOU SAY G0* KI11E<%!?!?!?” Damien/Dae took a deep breath before smashing his foot on the ground, only to have the floor crack under his feet, small pieces falling down into an endless abyss of corrupted data below. He’d had enough of this place. Flipping through the screens as fast as he could, he reached his inventory and found that all he had was a single sprite ocarina. He decided to try and use it; sure, this may have been a creepy root town, but it sure wasn’t s normal one. Maybe it acted as a secret event dungeon or something…to his relief, it worked.

    [INSERT COMMERCIAL HERE]

    He ended up warping to the new first root town, <!--fonto:Comic Sans Ms--><span style="font-family:Comic Sans Ms"><!--/fonto-->a<!--fontc--></span><!--/fontc--> (Alpha) – Li Sylvana. Li Sylvana was always overcrowded, since it was where ALL the new players ended up going until about level 30 or so, (and depending on how often a person played, that could be a -long- time) but it was even more so because of the anniversary event taking place. Banners and posters were everywhere, and everyone was celebrating with smiles on their faces. Damien just about freaked then and there, not knowing how people would react if they saw his swords and tried to see his character information. Much to his surprise, however, everyone walked by him without even a second look. He saw a very friendly-looking harvest cleric in pale pink and asked her if she noticed anything strange about him.
    “Strange? What do you mean?” the cleric asked, confused.
    “Like…what do my weapons look like to you?”
    “Like very simple daggers…are they not supposed to?”
    “Oh no…they are…nevermind, thank you for your time.”
    “No problem.” It dawned on him that his weird stats appeared as completely normal to everyone else; they only looked bizarre to him. Maybe he was crazy. But he pushed that idea out of his mind fast. The harvest cleric smiled at him, turning and walking toward a group of people that had gathered in the center of town. An NPC with ‘Taka-san’ over his head spoke to them with a booming, appreciative voice.
    “Oh, I am so very happy! Players, thank you, ever so much! You have made us all at CC Corp happier than we could have ever known, with so many happy players happily playing our game! And so to show you our happiness and make you even happier, we are extending our special x10 EXP x10 MONEY event for a whole ‘nother day! Wooo!” The crowd cheered, presumably…well…happy. A bit irritated at the overusage of that…that word, Damien walked away from them, wondering if he could still gain EXP and MONEY if all of his stats were X-ed out. Did he even HAVE money? He pondered this as he headed toward a chaos gate, bumping into a female macabre dancer wearing a gorgeous blue-and-violet kimono. She carried a large metallic fan on her back, painted and decorated with floral designs as if it were a normal fan.
    “Oh, sorry…wasn’t paying attention, I guess.”
    “Oh, no problem, I wasn’t really paying attention either, heh. …Hey, did you just start today?”
    “No, I’ve been playing for a while, why would you ask that?”
    “…Your equipment’s all level 1.” she said, raising an eyebrow. “Well, no need to worry about that, this event is sure to pump up everyone!” She smiled warmly, putting her hand out for a shake.
    “My IGN’s MurasakiHana, heh, I like colors and naturey things, but I go by Hana…or Murasaki, if you’re pretty uptight.”
    “Nice to meet you, I’m Daedalus, go by Dae.”
    “Nice to meet you, too.” Hana smiled, putting her hands on her hips. “You need any help finding your way around here or anything?”
    “No, like I’ve told you…I’ve been playing for a while…This is, uh, my second character, I mean.”
    “Ooooooh. Well why didn’t you just say so?” She laughed. “I’ll just let you be on your way, then. What’s your primary’s IGN? I’ll give you my member address.”
    She was really testing his think-on-his-feet skills, it was getting tiresome, truthfully. “Uh, the thing is…” He thought for a moment, then swallowed. “I forgot my primary character. That’s why I had to make a secondary…I went on vacation for a while and I forgot all my stuff while I was away.”
    “Aww, that sucks. Here, I’ll just add this one and I’ll help you level, if you want.”
    ‘Wow, she’s NICE,” Dae thought, beaming. “Sure, what the heck. Thanks a lot.”
    “No problem, I don’t have much to do, anyway.” Hana added Dae to her Member List, and added him to her party. Dae walked towards the now rainbow-colored Chaos Gate and opened the Field Selection Screen.

    KEYWORDS: ________________ ________________ _________________

    He scrolled, trying to find a fairly high level field since he needed to level fast and Hana was there to level with him anyway. But it was acting…rather oddly.

    KEYWORDS: MYSTICAL TIME-TRAVELING PRELUDE

    LEVEL: 30
    MONSTER LEVEL: X
    TREASURE LEVEL: X
    FIELD TYPE: RAINFOREST

    “What the hell…? I can only go to this one field that was already selected for me.” Dae groaned in frustration, going back to where Hana was.
    “Really? How very strange…Here, let me try.”
    Hana took Dae’s place and approached the Chaos Gate. Her brow quickly furrowed and she returned. “Hmmm….you’re right…Level 30 is a bit high for me, though, I’m only level 26.”
    “Now what are we going to do?”
    “What do you think we’re going to do? Who cares if we’re too low-leveled? We have to go to that field, it’s probably a secret event or something with a rare treasure inside!”
    Dae looked skeptical for a minute, giving Hana a sort of ‘wtf?’ look, but decided it best if he went with her. He could use the leveling anyway.
    Hana smiled at him again and the two of them marched to the Chaos Gate, selecting Mystical Time-Traveling Prelude as their field.
    No, don’t go!
    A voice rang in Dae’s ears, freezing him up for a second right before Hana warped the two of them.
    “Did you just say something, Hana?”
    “No…why?”
    “Nothing, guess I was just imagining things.”
    Hana shrugged and pressed the ‘Warp’ button, and off they went.

    [/Play 1st Season ED: Angela Aki - Jiyuu no Ashiato]
    [Insert Credits Here]
    [/Play]

    [I would say a NEXT TIME thing...but I'm not sure what I'm doing lol so I don't want it to be inaccurate :P I HAVE introduced an audition person in there, but you have to guess who it is, HA~...If you're really smart you might be able to guess who it is ^___^.

    So...tell me what you guys think and I'll get started on Episode 2. :D~!]
  • PhoenixIcePhoenixIce
    February 2007
    lota mistakes but....OMFGWTFBBQTHISISAWESOME!!!!!
    Great start, and im sure it can onli get better ^^ GO RAI!!
  • RaianRaian
    February 2007

    PhoenixIce:


    lota mistakes
    Yeah lol thanks for kinda proofreading it for me~

    I think I fixed all the mistakes lol

    next time I'll read over the whole thing before I post it xD
  • Hotshot210Hotshot210
    February 2007
    Oooooooooooo I liked it!! It was actually pretty good MORE MORE!
  • LilSaintLilSaint
    February 2007
    OMFG I'M IN THE STORY @_____@;;
    aren't I? X_X
    BESTESTANIMEMMORPRGSTORYEVEROMFGILOVEIT
    both thumbs up ^^

    let me guess the characters~!

    Andrew - Kowiz?
    Daniel - Me :X?
    Damien - You O_O?

    Ooor?
    who's Jasmine T-T? I think I heard that name somewhere before lol


    MurasakiHana o_o..someone we know or is it just your made up character? x_X
  • PhoenixIcePhoenixIce
    February 2007
    they're all AU players....just gota figure out which XD
  • shubygirlshubygirl
    February 2007
    wow awesome!!~ XD I like it! ^^
  • RaianRaian
    February 2007
    lololol~

    I actually made 2 made-up characters to throw you guys off xD~

    and I haven't introduced my character yet, hehehehe~.

    Damien and Jasmine are made-up characters, so are Amira and Taka-san. Everyone else though is an AU person.
  • Hotshot210Hotshot210
    February 2007
    RAIIIIIIII WRITEEEEEEEE!
  • mzlolzmzlolz
    February 2007
    Oh wow!! I like it! I'll be back for your second chapter! >:D This fic is pretty humorous.
  • xSpYdaHxxSpYdaHx
    February 2007
    simply put......


    <!--fonto:Impact--><span style="font-family:Impact"><!--/fonto--><!--sizeo:7--><span style="font-size:36pt;line-height:100%"><!--/sizeo-->I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!<!--sizec--></span><!--/sizec--><!--fontc--></span><!--/fontc-->
    lolwtfroflbbq?

    <3
  • PhoenixIcePhoenixIce
    February 2007
    this is great, i got 1 more anime/story to look forward to every week XD